Engetsu's Personal Jutsu FIN

[Engetsu Hōzuki]

Technique Name:

[Suiton: Ryūsui Yari] | [Water Release: Running Water Spear]

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: Suiton Specialist, B+ Rank Ninjutsu, Suiton Affinity
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: Suiton
Speed of Technique: Kunai x6
Description:

After forming the necessary hand-seals, the user creates large crescent-shaped blades of water, which follow the arcs of their hand movements but dont travel further than twice the arms length of the user. The user can twirl around while generating the crescent blades to attack all around themselves.

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Technique Name:

[Suiton: Naminorigeki] | [Water Release: Surfing Strike]

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: Suiton Specialist, B+ Rank Ninjutsu, Suiton Affinity
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: Suiton
Speed of Technique: Kunai x6
Description:

The user creates water underneath their feet like a wave (about 6 ft. in height) and then proceeds to ride it directly towards the opponent sending crashing wave after wave to attack them. This technique moves relatively fast across land, similar to the speed of skimboarding. The wave itself is no bigger than 6 ft. wide.

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Technique Name:

[Suiton: Gekiryūdan] | [Water Release: Torrent Bullet]

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: Suiton Specialist, B+ Rank Ninjutsu, Suiton Affinity
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: Suiton
Speed of Technique: N/A
Description:

Using their proficiency with Suiton, the user generates a powerful vortex of water around the opponent with a swing of their arm that traps them inside dealing heavy concussive damage to their entire body, the user then dispels it with another hand gesture. This technique while inherently offensive, can be used defensively by instead forming the vortex around ones own body. To use the opponent must be close range. It should also be noted this technique has no lethal qualities and only deals physical damage enough to cause bruising.

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Technique Name:

[Suiton: Shigure] | [Water Release: Drizzle]

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: Suiton Specialist, B+ Rank Ninjutsu, Suiton Affinity
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: Suiton
Speed of Technique: 6 Kunai..
Description:

After forming the hand-seal, the user condenses water vapour in the air to generate multiple projectiles of water which shoot at the opponent with a great amount of force and speed. Engetsu (with Hydrification) can also shoot a barrage of small water projectiles directly from the swing of his hand.

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Technique Name:

[Kiri-ryū: Dekishi Chissoku] | [Mist-Style: Drowning Suffocation]

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: N/A
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Elemental Nature: Yin
Speed of Technique: N/A
Description:

This jutsu is initiated through physical contact. After making contact, the user then says the word: "Sink" which activates the technique. Once in the genjutsu, the victim will find themselves submerged deep under water and short on breath. The jutsu produces the sensation of suffocation due to the lack of oxygen underwater, causing the victim to hyperventilate in attempt to gain much needed air. If not released within minutes, the victim will be rendered unconscious from the sensation of choking. This technique involves fail-safes which include the situation where if the user chooses to hold their breath the sensation of choking will cease until they are forced to exhale.

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Technique Name:

[Kiri-ryū: Fukai Umi Atsuryoku ] | [Mist-Style: Deep Sea Pressure]

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: N/A
Rank: C
Type: Genjutsu
Elemental Nature: Yin
Speed of Technique: N/A
Description:

This jutsu is initiated through physical contact after a hand-seal. Upon physical contact, the victim is locked within the genjutsu and will immediately begin to experience the sensation of steadily increasing pressure surround them. With the increasing pressure, movement and breathing become harder and painful due to the increasing pressure crushing ones bones. This technique is best used in combination with 'Demonic Illusion Drowning Suffocation'.

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[Me]

1st Tech:

[1ALL] | Can you add B-Rank+ Ninjutsu as a requirement, with specialty of Elemental being Suiton. Like: B-Rank+ Ninjutsu[Suiton Main] or something like that.

[2] | I need a speed at which these blades travel, as they are freely controlled projectiles.

[3ALL] | You don't need, can be taught IC, thats a given.

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Second Tech:

[1] | Can i get a size of the wave. Just for clarification. Length and Width-Wise, also speed at which the waves move.

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Third Tech:

[1] | The idea of surrounding the opponent in a vortex with the wave of your arm is pretty intense, and then causing burial like concussive damage, if i gave it a speed at which it formed, there could be some lee-way. I would have to decline on the existence of this.

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Fourth Tech:

[1] | Need speed.

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Fifth Tech:

[1] | Good Technique. I would like if it was edited that the unconsciousness would be caused by self-hyperventilation / lack of oxygen, why? Because inducing a sense of suffocating would cause one to intensively try to breathe, or hold their breathe[You're in water, probably what you would do], and whichever the RP'er decides to do, they would pass out by simply that. Also, i would like to have them capable of seeing you while in the gen, cause you suddenly disappearing = instantly knowing its a gen. Simply for support. Oh, and, for the hold breath part, they experience a sense of suffocation, IF they did hold their breath, they would still experience that feeling, does this mean they can easily discover the existence of an illusion?

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[1] | I would like a trigger other than physical contract being made, like a handseal beforehand and you must attempt to make contact, simply cause in close-combat fights, you can just take a punch and boom = they in an illusion.

[Engetsu Hōzuki]

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for tech#3 i dont exactly understand what you mean when you say 'burial like concussive damage'. Is that a no-no?

For tech#5 how i wrote it is perfect, the only way you can immediately know a genjutsu is to god mode that, or you have the sharingan. The purpose of genjutsu is to trick the mind into believing whatever is going on is absolutely real. And I think if they saw my character in the technique as well but not reacting similar would give the technique away. And whether they hold their breath or not does nothing to prolong the technique's effect, because i wrote that they are short on breath upon being in the technique so itll lead to them immediately trying to inhale.

[Me]

Alright:

[@1 & 2] | Still need a speed, i removed the confusion you possessed before about the speed system by elating some unnecessary information.

[@3] | Yes.

[@5] | Yes, it's probably the wording that's getting me. But feeling a sense of shortness of breath/ suffocating / choking won't cause the person to collapse[Cause whether the brain/lung wants to or not, it will instinctively gather oxygen under pressure, and as it is an illusion, it will, with just the same sense of suffocating], but tremendous amount of mental strain or a physical aspect that is affected by the gen, such as hyper-ventilating / holding breath for too long. The seeing you was optional. Also, being short on breath and holding your breath causes two distinctive feels to it, this is why i asked if they would immediately recognize, whether they god-mod or not. Try running for a long-period of time, and then holding your breath, the sensation changes. Similar to if you're drowning due to lack of breath and you suddenly hold your breath in attempt to avoid such a fate. Having your air-way chocked off by someone, while you hold your breath, the sensation of suffocating temporarily ceases.

I agree, the fraction of purpose in genjutsu is the art of trickery, misdirection, and various other magician like traits. But the point is to add a realistic feel without it being contradicted by another. Like, burning alive being contradicted by being wet. If someone is in water and you use a genjutsu that surrounds them in fire and give them a burning sensation, the immediate mind tries to find a solution to the fire, the conscious mind would already know they are in water yet still burning, the contradiction between the two feelings can then be worked out if knowledge of gen is present.

Its not like you're gonna have the persons real pharnyx or larnyx close with an illusion and cause them to suffocate.

I just ask for some clarification.

[Engetsu Hōzuki]

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[Me]

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