Body Trap Seal FIN

[Shou Uzumaki]

Technique Name:

[Karada Wana Fūin ] | [Body Trap Seal]

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: A Rank Fuuinjutsu and a Freshly Killed Person
Rank: A
Type: Fuuinjutsu/Kinjutsu/Ninjustu
Description:

This fuuinjutsu was created to trap person in the form of another. This fuuinjutsu can only be performed with one living person and a freshly killed person. The fuuinjutsu is performed with each body place on one this symbol that would be drawn on the ground with white chalk. Once each body is place on its own seal the user with start to perform the string of hand signs. Once the hand seals are completed the user will glow bright purple and tentacles of that purple chakra will shoot out until they latch onto each person.

The dead body will then start to glow purple and then they will slowly start to melt away from the skin all the way down to the bones until the body has disappeared. During that process the dead persons skin and organs gets transferred over on top of the living persons skin and organs.

Multiple bodies can be sealed into one person and can be switched at will. Up to 12 bodies can be sealed into the seal. The only way to switch bodies is to clap their hands together and whispered the body’s given title. When the user, uses another body he can only use their chakra natures, making it impossible for the user to use their own, unless the body wasn’t a shinobi or had been stripped of its natural chakra.

When switching bodies it can either take a long period of time, taking only a small amount of chakra or a short period of time taking a larger amount of chakra. Body switching in battle takes a lot of chakra but it is used to confuse the enemy and for one to get the upper hand in battle

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[Me]

Some things not discussed in chat:

[1] | "This fuuinjutsu can only be performed with one living person and a fresh killed person." - Excerpt; 1st Paragraph - 2nd Sentence. "fresh" --> "freshly".

"During that processed the dead persons skin and organs gets transferred over on top of the living persons skin and organs." - Excerpt; 2nd Paragraph - 2nd Sentence. "processed" --> "process" You can add a comma there for better grammar, so "During that process, [etc]."

"Multiple bodies can be sealed into one person and can be twitched at will but it takes se." - Excerpt; 3rd Paragraph - 1st Sentence. "twitched" --> "switched" & "se" --> "time." Some minor spelling error.

[1cont.] | I won't go through all mistakes, but just run-it through a quick program for the easy stuff, it should make it better.

[2] | I know i said this before, but i want a maximum amount of bodies the seal can hold. Every seal has some form of limit, so simply something like 12 / 10 people would be good.

[3] | Can you put A-Rank Fuinjutsu, and not "Fuinjutsu A"

That's it.

[Shou Uzumaki]

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[Shou Uzumaki]

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