Ren Homma "Nazo"
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Post by Ren Homma "Nazo" on Jun 21, 2013 20:30:59 GMT -5
Name: Doll House Desired Rank: B-Rank Participants:- Nagase Eri
- Ren Homma "Nazo"
NPC: enabled Random Upgrade: enabled Mission Description:Patients have been arriving at Sunagakure's Hospital with the most unusual wounds. With foam bubbling near the surface of each laceration it is highly possible some sort of acid or poison has been used on many of these patients, however that is the only common factor between the patients other than odd pronged bite marks somewhere along the legs.
Since poison is one of his specialties, Nazo has been called in to examine the patients and hopefully develop a cure for their ailments before its too late to save their lives. Assisting him in these efforts is Head Medic, Nagase Eri. However when they start investigating the wounds they may just find more than they originally bargained for.
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Me
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Post by Me on Jun 21, 2013 20:41:18 GMT -5
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[ALLINONE] | Since this is basically a medical emergency, it should be worded differently since the head medic is instead of searching for a cure with what's given[patients], going out to find the culprit. The assignment of the Head Medic and the mission overall should be to find the source of the poison and neutralize it, because having the source[plant / some organism is more plausible than a straight kill mission. Also, you never state how they know its a perpetrator causing poison, so why would the mission be to track one down? It'll be to track the source based on information gained by the dying patients[which is better explained], and if its a person behind it, have at it!
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Akemi
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Post by Akemi on Jun 21, 2013 20:51:24 GMT -5
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