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Post by Shou Uzumaki on Jun 21, 2013 10:16:33 GMT -5
Technique Name: Uramiame | Grudge Rain
Technique's Label: Universal
Technique Prerequisites: B-Rank or higher Suiton ninjutsu skill and two or more shinobi/clones
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: Suiton
Description: This technique requires a various amount of users. The users create a large storm cloud, which in turn produces rain. The large amount of rain can then turn into a large wave of water and sweeps the enemy off their feet. As long as the targets are trapped by the water, their chakra will be continuously drained. All users must maintain the handseal to keep the technique active.
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Post by Akemi on Jun 21, 2013 12:49:08 GMT -5
The technique prerequisites should read: B-Rank or higher Suiton ninjutsu skill and two or more shinobi/clones. B-Rank+ implies a specialization in ninjutsu, not that rank or higher. Once you fix that, this will be good to go.
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Post by Shou Uzumaki on Jun 21, 2013 13:51:36 GMT -5
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Post by Me on Jun 21, 2013 14:05:33 GMT -5
"[2] | I remember this tech getting approved before, it had the same restriction as before, all users must maintain the handseal to keep the technique active. Add that to it, and its alright." - Previous Review.
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Post by Shou Uzumaki on Jun 21, 2013 14:07:21 GMT -5
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Post by Me on Jun 22, 2013 11:56:48 GMT -5
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