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Post by Shou Uzumaki on Jun 26, 2013 9:09:16 GMT -5
Name: Kurage | Medusa Classification: Weapon Type of: Urumi Physical Description: Kurage is a sword with flexible bands of steel three-quarters to one inch in width, and long enough to reach from the fingertip of one hand to the finger tip of the other hand when the hands are held outstretched at around five and a half feet. Kurage has four blades. It has a small handle that is covered in black tape and then wrapped with a silver chain. The weapon is normal carried much like a whip and is pulled together in a ring and hangs from Suijin's right hip. Object's Capabilities: Kurage's blades are able to be covered in suiton chakra. When the blades are covered in suiton they can be lengthened and sharpened making it a very dangerous weapon. The blades can have a suiton length of up to four or five feet making the weapon's blades stretch out to ten feet. The blades once covered in chakra can cause deep cuts that can almost go to the bone and if enough force is thrown the blades it can cut into bone. Shop Cost: 45,000 Name: Mizu saishū | Water Gatherer Classification: Item Type of: Metal Cuffs Physical Description: Mizu Saishū are a pair of silver cuffs that are both designed with complex symbols and lines. These cuffs are normally found on Suijin's wrists and are normally clipped and locked onto his wrists unless Suijin takes them off. [IMAGE] Object's Capabilities: These silver cuffs were made many years ago by shinobi weapon maker. These cuffs have been infused with chakra when made as well as being engraved with a chakra graver. The one purpose for these wrist bands is to give the user the ability to pull water from living things such as trees, plants as well as underground water. These bands can be used to extract water from the human body but the body has to be dead and fresh since water will start to leave the body as it decomposes. Shop Cost: 45,000
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Post by haywire on Jun 26, 2013 9:27:59 GMT -5
Just to make it clearer and more professional, could you check through for spelling and grammar errors? There are a couple of minor mistakes. (Eg. "made many years ago by shinobi weapon maker", "Theses cuffers")
Once that's done, you get my...
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Post by Shou Uzumaki on Jun 26, 2013 9:30:56 GMT -5
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