Ninjutsu, Chigetsu - ii. | FIN

[Kanashimi Izanami]

Technique Name:

Kuchiyose: Sōzō Daibakuha no Jutsu | Summoning: Great Explosion Technique

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: Clam Contract
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: None
Description:

This technique summons forth a large pearl from a bomber clam within the target's immediate vicinity. After a second, the pearl automatically detonates (a product of being away from its source). The resulting explosion is roughly five yards in diameter, and is able to kill within its immediate range (a yard). Further out, victims will be injured according to their distance from the immediate range.

Technique Name:

Suika: Kawarimi no Jutsu | Hydrification: Body Replacement Technique

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: Hydrification Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu, Hiden
Elemental Nature:
Description:

This technique is an application of the Hydrification technique that allows Chigetsu to leave behind a mass of water in her likeness, replacing herself at the moment that a technique lands. While in one sense it is less efficient than the regular "Kawarimi no Jutsu" (the water image disperses very shortly after it's hit [about a second or two] and "bleeds" water depending on the attack) it is several times more efficient in another sense (because the need to move to find a replacement is no longer needed, it is easier to achieve an advantageous position).

Technique Name:

Suika: Suiton Shuriken | Hydrification: Water Release Shuriken

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: B-rank Chakra Control
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Technique Speed: Kunai x2
Elemental Nature:
Description:

Using the Hydrification technique, Chigetsu is able to create shuriken of water that can be launched toward the opposition. Compacted and compressed, the shuriken have more cutting and piercing ability than regular shuriken, which allows them to better move through the air toward their targets. The power or speed of the technique can also be further increased by making different shapes. Also, each projectile can be controlled with chakra one by one, making avoiding them all extremely difficult.

Technique Name:

Suika: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu | Hydrification: Water Clone Technique

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: Hydrification Technique
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature:
Description:

Using the Hydrification Technique, Chigetsu is able to use her own body as a conduit to create water clones; however, these clones never actually exist in the environment. Instead, they exist as an extension of her body. Formed only partially, Chigetsu is able to form either half of a clone's body or extra limbs. They can also utilize Suiton techniques.

[Kanashimi Izanami]

Ready for Review

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Kuchiyose: Sōzō Chinami no Jutsu | Summoning: Creation of a Thousand Waves Technique - For something that creates such a massive amount of water, up the rank to A.

Suika: Mizu no Hito | Hydrification: Man of Water - Denied. Using the moisture in the air as a substitute for the user's chakra reserves could potentially allow for infinite chakra, especially in humid environments.

Suika: Kirigakure no Jutsu | Hydrification: Hidden Mist Technique - Denied. This effectively makes the user invulnerable to almost all attacks (if not all, you have not specified any weaknesses), while enabling them to attack from blind spots almost instantaneously. No. Just no.

Suika: Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu | Hydrification: Water Clone Technique - Actually, this one seems ok to me.

[Kanashimi Izanami]

I've changed the first one, and I've also changed the second. In case it's needed, I used Paper Shuriken as a base for the new technique in place of number three and scaled it up to a C-rank (which used Phoenix Flower for aid as well).

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Kuchiyose: Sōzō Daibakuha no Jutsu | Summoning: Great Explosion Technique - Change "crippled" to "injured". Crippled implies that even on the edge the damage is severe.

Suika: Suiton Shuriken | Hydrification: Water Release Shuriken - For each to be controlled individually would require impressive chakra control. Could you add B-Rank Chakra Control to the prerequisites?

[Kanashimi Izanami]

I've made the changes.

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[Akemi]