Hojo Clan | Scattered | Done

[Inari]

Clan Surname:

Hojo

Clan's Location:

Scattered

Clan Origin:

Cloud Country

Special Traits:

Physical Features
All of the Hojo clan are born with light colored hair mostly blond with dark heads such as black or brown being extremely rare. They are light in skin tone and also are known for having very light eyes such as blue and green.

High Tolerance to the Cold
Hojo members being originally from the Cloud country which is a very cold climate have become highly tolerant to the cold. They do still get cold like most people but it takes drastic cold to make them actually feel it. But the downfall to this is that hot temperatures make is terrible for them. Hojo clan members hate the heat because it feels almost twice as hot than it normally is.

Bukijutsu
This clan has a natural talent for weaponry. Most people of the clan are given a weapon at a young age that the head elder would chosen for them based on their physical and mental performance when they first perform their skills to them. With this most clam members started off at D ranked Bukijutsu rather than E.

Historical Background:

The Hojo clan was a very small group of people who specialized in none throwing weapons such as swords, spears and other weapons such as these. The clan was small and weak against the other large clans of the shinobi word so they fled northwards where they would find their home in the Land of Clouds. The small clan grew in size but as they grew their children started to die. Genetic deformities and mental illness started to pop up from inbreeding between clan members. But one day a young shinobi from Amegakure arrived in the village and asked for the clan to come with her back to her home village. Many of the clansmen decided to follow her and very few staid in their home village.

The clan made its home in Amegakure and became one of its most well-known clans. But then the attack of the Bijuu came and has wiped out the clan other than Hojo and any other clansmen from the Cloud Country.

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Amegakure - You have put Amegakure in the title, despite the fact (as is my understanding, at least) their origin is the Cloud Country and the only survivors now reside in the Cloud Country? Please fix this.

Bokijutsu - *Bukijutsu (we use this spelling here)

Otherwise, you just need to proof-read this or run it through a decent spelling/grammar check. The only errors I can remember at the moment are at the end of the first paragraph of 'Historical Background'; "Many of the clansmen decided to fallow her and very few staid in their home village."
fallow -> follow || staid -> stayed
And near the beginning - "not throwing" is grammatically incorrect (also, it is arbitrary, since you also give examples afterwards).

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[Me]

Hm:

[1] | There's no such place as the land of cloud, only land of lightning which i'm sure is what you meant and thus the correct translation is Kaminari no Kuni.

[2] | Well, it originated from [Iunno] Country, but should be labeled where the clan current resides, and that'll be Scattered: Tsuchi & Mori & Kaminari. Correct labeling[Most likely].

[3] | No one is physically immune to the cold, hell cold is the absent of heat, by this definition immunity to cold means you can stand Sub Zero temperatures and walk out like a beast. The clan can possess a high tolerance to the cold, but i wonder why they developed this way when they originated from Kaminari[Land of Lightning.] How do you justify this tolerance of cold?

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And there is such a place as Clound Country Its the small Mint Green colored country on the top of The Earth Country.

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