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[Kaguya Katsuro]

Technique Name:

Sotokokkaku | [Exo-Skeleton]

Technique's Label: [Clan]
Technique Prerequisites: [1] Shikotsumyaku
[2] KG A+ rank
Rank: [A-Rank]
Type: [Kekkei Genkai]
Elemental Nature: [N/A]
Speed of Technique: [N/A]
Description:

An highly advanced Shikotsumyaku technique that requires high mastery and control over one's Kekkei Genkai to perform. The user will first make an duplicate of their unique skeletal structure, unlike that of humans, then expand and protrude the entire skeleton around their body to act as a second layer of their skin, and thus giving them a visible exo-skeleton of white. By doing this, the joints are still there, allowing normal movements, simply on an overall body scale, and the bone's density + weight lowers the users overall Shunshin[Speed Only] -1. It however, increases their defenses, increasing their Taijutsu[Endurance/Defense & Physical Strength Only] +1 over their entire body due to the increased blows dealt by the dense bone. If it one Taijutsu is S-Rank, this allows the Taijutsu[Endurance/Defense Only] to become Specialization Level.

The defensive capabilities due to the density of the bones nulls most blunt force attacks as well as explosive, crushing, and weak piercing attacks. Concussive force, can however, damage the user within their Exo-Skeleton. The bones can be burned and shocked normally. Though it does take quite a lot of heat to weaken the bones and the electricity will not conduct as well as it would though skin.

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Technique Name:

Sukeruton| [Enhanced Endoskeleton]

Technique's Label: Clan
Technique Prerequisites: A rank KG
Rank: [B-Rank]
Type: [Kekkei Genkai]
Elemental Nature: [N/A]
Speed of Technique: [N/A]
Description:

By increasing the density of their bones by three times underneath their skin, the user can coat themselves with an extra protected endoskeleton, increasing their Taijutsu[Defense/Enudrance & Physical Strength Only] by +1, while decreasing their Shunshin[Speed Only] by -1 due to the added weight and density.

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Technique Name:

Koukotsu Kote| Bone Gauntlet

Technique's Label: Clan
Technique Prerequisites: Shikotsumyaku
Skill Rank: C
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Elemental Nature: None
Description:

This ability is extremely simple in terms of the ability of most capable Clan member. This creates a layer of bone over the hand or hands of the user, creating a skin tight and completely flexible defense. It depends on the general skill of the user in his or her bloodline but it can even at the lowest rank stop most kinds of blades with ease. This also increase the destructive power of an attack, simply by adding more weight behind the punch then before. [+1 Taijustu (Strength)] but this also lowers their speed of the punch -1 Shunshin[Speed Only]

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Technique Name:

Yoroi Kinkin | Armor Piercing

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: Shikotsumyaku, B+ Rank, Teshi Sendan
Rank: C rank
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Elemental Nature: None
Speed of Technique: Kunai x7
Description:

This is a powerful variation of Ten Finger Bullet, which requires the user to be speced into the Shikotsumyaku. This allows the user to morph the shape of the finger bullets into a different shape, allowing for different effects. This bullet is an armor piercing round, capable of punching though things that the normal Ten Finger Bullet can not, but at the cost of damage for penetrative power.

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Technique Name:

Kuudou Chobo | Hollow Point

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: Shikotsumyaku, B+ Rank, Teshi Sendan
Rank: C
Type: Kekkei Genkai
Elemental Nature: None
Speed of Technique: Kunai x7
Description:

This is a powerful variation of Ten Finger Bullet, which requires the user to be speced into the Shikotsumyaku. This allows the user to morph the shape of the finger bullets into a different shape, allowing for different effects. This bullet is hollow point, which in exchange for penetrative power, there is a lot more damage to soft tissue (aka flesh, muscle and bone). This could leave a hole the size of a dime on one side and leave a hole the size of a softball on the other, or for those of you who do not know what a softball or dime is, the entrance wound is approximately 2 Cm to an exit wound of 6cm in diameter.

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[Swindler]

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[haywire]

Sotokokkaku | [Exo-Skeleton] - Bump up KG prerequisite to A-Rank+

Sukeruton| [Enhanced Endoskeleton] - Add Shikotsumyaku prerequisite. This seems to have exactly the same effect as the jutsu above it but is a lower rank and doesn't require specialisation... Explain, please?

Koukotsu Kote| Bone Gauntlet - This should also lower the speed of the attack. If you must quantify this one with stats, add [-1 Shunshin (Speed)]. Otherwise, just say the force of the blows is increased and the speed is decreased. For something where the whole stat isn't affected the change is just irritating to me...

Yoroi Kinkin | Armor Piercing - Change "Shikotsumyaku specialty" to "Shikotsumyaku" and "KG B-Rank+". Add Speed of Technique; "Same as normal Ten Bullet" is just lazy. Go check.

Kuudou Chobo | Hollow Point - I'm not American. I don't know what a dime and a softball are, let alone their relative sizes. Use examples that the rest of the world can understand or just use standardised measurements (which I would prefer). Also, change "Shikotsumyaku specialty" to "Shikotsumyaku" and "KG B-Rank+" and add Speed of Technique.

[Kaguya Katsuro]

The first two justus were created by Doc himself for me... because I asked him too... So the issues with that are something you can bring up with him.... but I assume that due to the simple fact the bones are on the inside of your body it would be easier to create an armor that is near the bones then not.... I would assume...

Second: I am not being Lazy as the Ten Finger Bullet does not currently have a speed.... so.... what would you like for me to do about that...

[haywire]

No. The issues with that are something you can bring up with him. You're the one trying to get these jutsu approved so you're the one that I'm going to converse with. If you want EK to talk to me, feel free to ask him. I, however, have too much work to be getting on with to mess about with that - I'm already using my own free time to look at these apps, don't ask me to double the time that takes because you didn't write your own jutsu...

Anyway... I'll accept that reasoning, providing you add A-Rank KG prerequisite to Sukeruton| [Enhanced Endoskeleton].

Ten Finger Bullet does have a speed. I might not have when you checked but it does now. xD So go check. Even if it still didn't have a speed, you could make one up and we'd be able to tell you if it were acceptable or not in our reviews.

[Kaguya Katsuro]

There it is edited...

[haywire]

Sotokokkaku | [Exo-Skeleton] - This still requires A-Rank+ KG.

Koukotsu Kote| Bone Gauntlet - I've just realised that this is Personal. It should be Clan, really, since I can't imagine your character was the first Kaguya to do it...

[Kaguya Katsuro]

Most likely not... v.v..... and I edited it.

[haywire]

Awesome, thanks.



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