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Post by Fūma Kotarō on Aug 3, 2013 20:29:43 GMT -5
Technique Name: Kaminoke no Mojiretsu | Hair String
Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: D Shurikenjutsu / Long Hair
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu / Supplementary
Elemental Nature: n/a
Speed of Technique: Kunai 4x
Description: This jutsu allows the user to use their hair like it is a wire or chakra thread. After attaching their hair to shuriken, kunai, any type of weapon they can throw it and use their hair to swing and or retract it. The hair is not visible to most people, as it is so thing yet durable. The jutsu making it incredibly hard, regular tools cannot cut it. If the line is cut, the hair can no longer be controlled and all effects seize.
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Technique Name: Kebario | Hair Needle
Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: Long Hair
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: n/a
Speed of Technique: Kunai 5x
Description: After performing the dog handseal the user can make their hair shoot forward and grow at their opponent in spikes. These are capable of piercing the enemy, swiftly, and precisely. The hair morphs forward quickly not capable of holding opponents there. It also cannot go far, only about six feet in front of the user.
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Berugu Kosui
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Post by Berugu Kosui on Aug 4, 2013 2:14:23 GMT -5
+Kaminoke no Mojiretsu | Hair String
Make a note that the hair must be in constant contact with the user to retain its abilities, otherwise it just goes back to regular ole hair.
+Kebario | Hair Needle
What separates this from Jiraiya's Lion Mane technique (or one of his hair techniques), because it's awfully close to it.
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Post by Fūma Kotarō on Aug 4, 2013 2:19:25 GMT -5
Sorry, I did not mean to be so vague.
1. Fixed~
2. It is not lions mane, because it just shoots in separate spikes and only goes out so far. It is not like Lions mane where it can swerve and move towards an opponent to grab them then pierce them. I guess it is kind of a very simple form of it, but it is still different. I added more explanation at the end to help clear it up. Thank you again <3
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Berugu Kosui
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Post by Berugu Kosui on Aug 4, 2013 2:31:33 GMT -5
Approved
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Post by haywire on Aug 4, 2013 13:17:45 GMT -5
You have broken code in both jutsu templates. Please fix this.
Kaminoke no Mojiretsu | Hair String - Does this jutsu extend the user's hair at their will? Or is it limited to its natural extent?
Kebario | Hair Needle - This seems fine. ^_^
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Post by Fūma Kotarō on Aug 4, 2013 13:59:10 GMT -5
It extends with the hair and grows using chakra, used basically like a wire, there is of course a length it can go you know? Like nothing ridiculous like "49324032490 miles" know what I mean? :3
& fixed the coding! ^_^
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Post by haywire on Aug 4, 2013 18:06:29 GMT -5
That's fine, I just wanted to clarify!
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