Tozuka, Akaime
Waterfall Ninja
Ichibuntai Genin [M:0:15000:]
Posts: 27
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Post by Tozuka, Akaime on Aug 6, 2013 4:20:44 GMT -5
Familiar's Name: Umō Species Category: Flightless bird Specific Animal Type: Ostrich Familiars Appearance: Weight: 346 lbs. Height: 9 ft 2 in
Umou's feathers are almost pitch black, with white primaries and a white tail. His head and neck is nearly bare, with a thin layer of down feathers. The long neck and legs keep his head up to 2.8 m above the ground, and having eyes that are said to be the largest of any land vertebrate; he can therefore perceive predators at a great distance. His eyes are shaded from sunlight from above. However, the head and bill are relatively small for the birds' huge size. Umoi has just two toes on each foot , with the nail on the larger, inner toe resembling a hoof. The outer toe has no nail. The reduced number of toes is an adaptation that appears to aid in running, useful for getting away from pursuers and the talons and very well rip through flesh. The bird can run at a speed over 70 km/h (43 mph) and can cover 3 to 5 m (9.8 to 16 ft) in a single stride. The wings reach a span of about 2 metres (6 ft 7 inches). The bird has red paint marking designed on his neck.
Familiars Personality: Positives:- Brave - put his life on the line for his master
- Protective
- Loyal
- Peaceful - tries to avoid conflict if possible
Negatives:- Born Killer - anyone he finds a threat [it is said that ostriches can kill humans]
- Reckless
- Caution with humans - won't trust strangers easily
Relationship with Owner: Umou, having spend four years with Akaime is a sort of older sibling like figure. While protective of his master, he doesn't seem to go against her wishes, unless of course, he imagines her getting hurt in the process. He is often Akaime's ride in and around the village and on missions. Special Traits: - Sensory Perception [B-Rank]
- Heightened Senses : [Acute eyesight and hearing]
- Taijutsu : [Powerful limbs - These birds will vigorously patrol and defend their masters/offsprings and have been known to kill young lions with their strong kicks, capable of delivering a force of up to 500 pounds per square inch.] [B-Rank]
- Speed Demon [A-Rank]
- Immunity : [Being brought up in a rather harsh environment Ostriches have a rather advanced immunity system that can prevent poisoning from food, bacteria and other poisonous animals such as snakes and scorpions.
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Tozuka, Akaime
Waterfall Ninja
Ichibuntai Genin [M:0:15000:]
Posts: 27
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Post by Tozuka, Akaime on Aug 7, 2013 4:14:14 GMT -5
Finished
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Post by haywire on Aug 7, 2013 8:09:48 GMT -5
Can you give a rank (E-S, as in the skills threads) for Sensory Perception and Taijutsu?
Why would an ostrich be immune to most poisons? Without an explanation to this in the app, it seems a little out of place.
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Tozuka, Akaime
Waterfall Ninja
Ichibuntai Genin [M:0:15000:]
Posts: 27
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Post by Tozuka, Akaime on Aug 7, 2013 11:11:21 GMT -5
Edits made~
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Post by haywire on Aug 7, 2013 12:59:42 GMT -5
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Berugu Kosui
Sand Ninja
Chuunin Task Force [M:7050:0:]
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Post by Berugu Kosui on Aug 9, 2013 19:52:24 GMT -5
Speed demon is not an adequate measure of speed. Please put a rank.
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Tozuka, Akaime
Waterfall Ninja
Ichibuntai Genin [M:0:15000:]
Posts: 27
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Post by Tozuka, Akaime on Aug 9, 2013 19:57:49 GMT -5
Done
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Berugu Kosui
Sand Ninja
Chuunin Task Force [M:7050:0:]
Posts: 105
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Post by Berugu Kosui on Aug 9, 2013 20:02:47 GMT -5
Approved
[2/2]
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