Minamori Clan | FIN | Scattered

[Kensei Unagi]

Clan's Symbol

Clan Surname:

Minamori Clan

Clan's Location:

Scattered

Clan Origin:

Konohagakure

Special Traits:

Their special techniques come in the form of a Style known as Jishin Hadouken [Seismic Wave Motion Fist], which is a sound based style. The user creates sounds then augments them with their chakra, creating pulsing vibrations. The vibrations pulse through the user's body, granting them offensive/defensive physical abilities. These vibrations can be used inside the body, or outside the body for a number of effects. When used internally, the vibrations can grant bursts of strength or speed for the user; as well as, cause heavy internal damage to the opponent. When used externally, the vibrations are emitted in the form of shockwaves. These shockwaves are stronger the closer they are to the user, and weaker as they travel far. Though the style is based off of Ninjutsu techniques, the Minamori Clan utilize them to augment their taijutsu.

Historical Background:

The Minamori Clan was created by tribal warriors from ages back. These warriors believed that war-cries and chants aided them in battle, strengthening their body and spirit. They were brutal fighters, with seemingly endless physical strength. The louder the combatant, the stronger he seemed to be. These traditions passed on as time did, eventually forming into an actual shinobi clan. The clan's founder was a man named Yagishiro Minamori. He was a man of honor and pride, yet not very bright in nature.

The Clan would emerge within the Land of Lightning. Yagishiro rebuilt the clan there, though most of the clan had separated during that battle. In Kumogakure, Yagi brought up a family, two sons named Jirou and Haruto. Jirou, the oldest son, was a spitting image of his father; equally as gullible and brutish. Whereas Haruto was more relaxed and not so easily angered. Upon his last request, Haruto was made head of the clan. Jirou, upset by such a decision, attempted to murder his own brother. His efforts failed, as Haruto would stop the attack, killing his brother as a result.

[Kensei Unagi]

Ready for Review

[Me]

Hm:

[1] | I'm not sure on the Hiden Taijutsu Style copied from the Jyuken, even the mechanics are weird, cause vibrations are closely attuned with sound techniques and raiton, not doton. Reproducing Seismic Waves and replicating them with chakra without it originating from any form is an odd mechanic, which is why i request another admin to check to see if my confirmation of lack of correct mechanics is valid or invalid, giving them the final decision on the matter.

[2] | Don't like the Uchiha Bastard Son, and awakening Sharingan. One, cause that means his son can also awaken the sharingan, or any of his family, and clans are usually compromised of family and then inbreeding, which is making me feel uneasy. You might have to change the history, and add another way for him to hate the uchiha without being related to one. Cause honestly, why wouldn't the uchiha just kill him straight out? But only take his eyes, it doesn't make much sense.

[Kensei Unagi]

I've edited, it should be much better now.

[Me]

Clans with Hiden/Kekkei Genkai can not have a Clan Perk.

After removal, 1/2.

[Swindler]

2/2