Haruto Minamori's Personal Taijutsu | FIN

[Kensei Unagi]

Technique Name:

Otokorashi-Ryu: Raion | Virility-Style: Lion

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: C-Rank Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Elemental Nature: N/A
Speed of Technique: Only applicable for Projectiles.
Description:

The user punches the opponent with an arching strike. Should the strike land, the user will push their fist against the opponent's body, forcing them to the ground with great force. The attack normally leaves the opponent smashed into the ground, lying on their back. Lie on = Lion.

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Technique Name:

Otokorashi-Ryu: Jousho Otokorashi | Virility-Style: Rising Manliness

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: C-Rank Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Elemental Nature: N/A
Speed of Technique: Only applicable for Projectiles.
Description:

The user starts by stepping forward, closing the distance between himself and the opponent. As the rear foot repositions itself, the user instead uses the momentum to lift it vertically, causing the ball of the foot to impact the opponent's chin. The force delivered from the kick transfers to the bone itself, causing dislocation of the jaw.

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Technique Name:

Otokorashi-Ryu: Hounyou | Virility-Style: Golden Shower

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: C-Rank Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Elemental Nature: N/A
Speed of Technique: Only applicable for Projectiles.
Description:

This maneuver normally follows Rising Manliness. After raising the leg, the user will quickly bring it down performing an axe kick upon the opponent's shoulder. The force of the kick is then transfered to the bone, causing shoulder dislocation.

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Technique Name:

Otokorashi-Ryu: Seppuku | Virility-Style: Stomach Cutting

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: C-Rank Taijutsu
Rank: D
Type: Taijutsu
Elemental Nature: N/A
Speed of Technique: Only applicable for Projectiles.
Description:

The user thrusts a spear-hand strike [open hand, pointed fingers] toward the opponent's lower abdomen. The power of the strike is enough to contact the lower intestines, causing irregular vomiting. This technique not only damages an opponent, but also disorients them.

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Technique Name:

Otokorashi-Ryu: Shitsuren | Virility-Style: Heartbreak

Technique's Label: Personal
Technique Prerequisites: None
Rank: B
Type: Taijutsu
Elemental Nature: N/A
Speed of Technique: Only applicable for Projectiles.
Description:

The user stands unguarded, watching as an opponent performs an attack. Just before the attack lands, the user avoids the attack, lunging forward with an elbow point attack toward the opponent's heart. The lunging of the user's attack, and the forward movement of the opponent's attack, generates enough power to disrupt the heart. The result of the attack causes the heartrate to be slowed to a minimal degree, yet enough to hinder the opponent's body from operating at full capacity. The weaker the opponent's body is, the longer the effects last. [Opponent's Taijutsu = Number of Posts Affected] (D-Rank Taijutsu = 4 Posts, C-Rank = 3 Posts, B-Rank = 2 Posts, A-Rank = 1 Post. S-Rank = Non-Effected)

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[Kensei Unagi]

Ready For Review

[The Reaper]

Personally I believe most of these attacks, based on the results you have given, all need to be bumped up one rank except for heartbreak. Also I believe there is a typo in Lion, could you please re-read it and fix it, it's a little difficult to understand.

[Kensei Unagi]

I fixed the typo. As far as the ranks are concerned, I believe they are fine as is, however, I have upped the prereqs to needing C-rank taijutsu. The techniques require a certain amount of strength, yet they are all still simple. None of the techniques are complex, they just have results that need at least Peak human strength. I think my fix should be appropriate

[The Reaper]

[Akemi]