Kyûin Marā | Konoha | Elite Jônin | Fin

[Kyûin Marā]

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Kyûin Marā

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Twenty five years of age
Female
Orphaned | Kyûin Clan
Konohagakure no sato, Hi no Kuni
Jônin
Fūton | Suiton
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Description
Standing at 5ft 9in, Marā is lithe in body and frame. Weighing in a 127 lbs, as drawn she wears a jacket top and metal clasp long skirt bottom. Adorning with shinobi boots, and a set of glasses with her hitai ate worn as a belt. Unseen in the drawing, is the weapons holster on her left thigh with a set of bandages underneath it. She wears glasses, to help her with astigmatism.[/color][/ul][/ul][/ul][/ul]

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Special Weapons and Items

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Statistical Information

3--- CR Chakra Reserves
3--- CC Chakra Control
3--- SN Shunsin
3--- NJ Ninjutsu
2--- TJ Taijutsu [C Rank | Cap B Rank]
0--- FJ Fuuinjutsu [C Rank]
0--- GJ Genjutsu [E Rank]
2--- SJ Shuriken Jutsu
1--- SP Sensory Perception [C Rank]

Techniques | Jutsu

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[/i] | Body Replacement Technique

-Kakuremino no Jutsu | Cloak of Invisibility Technique

-Bunshin no Jutsu | Clone Technique

-Nawanuke no Jutsu | Rope Escape Technique

-Henge no Jutsu | Transformation Technique[/ul]


--- D Rank

[/i] | Wind of Distraction

-Suiton: Mizugakure no Jutsu | Water Release: Hiding in Water Technique

-Kanashibari no Jutsu | Temporary Paralysis Technique[/ul]


--- C Rank

[/i] | Wind Release: Great Breakthrough

-Fuuton: Shinkuuha | Wind Release: Vacuum Wave

-Fuuton: Shinkuugyoku | Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere

-Suiton: Teppoudama | Water Release: Gunshot

-Suiton: Mizurappa | Water Release: Wild Water Wave

-Sensatsu Suishou | Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death[/ul]


--- B Rank

[/i] | Wind Release: Wind Cutter Technique

-Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu | Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique

-Kage Bunshin no Jutsu | Shadow Clone Technique[/ul]


--- A Rank

--- S Rank

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► Face Claim: Custom Drawing I made
► Chatango Name: EmptyNight
► Other Characters: N/A
► Special Position Claim: N/A

[The Reaper]

Alright very well done with all of the changes we discussed in PC.

I'm still unsure about a few things so I want another [higher up] staff member to review this before I give my approval.

[haywire]

Firstly, there are no Jōnin positions available in Konoha at the moment. You could either wait for us to open more positions (which may not be for a little while, since the other villages are currently relatively sparsely populated) or you could adapt this character for another village.

Secondly, were we able to approve this anyway, your history would still need more elaboration. It's quite vague, with no mention of the Chūnin Exams and nothing about her time as a Chūnin at all. She goes from Genin to Jōnin in two sentences...

We need more about these events. When, how, what happened? Your history is like the blurb on the back of a book - it gives clues and gets you wanting to read more but... There is no more. There is no book.

I'm not asking you to write an entire book, of course, just to explain a bit more and actually talk about her history rather than gloss over it with fancy poetic writing! xD Poetic writing is great but for a character's history, we need some solid facts.

[Kyûin Marā]

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[haywire]

Another good point that I'm ashamed to say I forgot to mention... You should probably read our site timeline/plot (or re-read). There was no Kyūbi attack on Konoha because there was no Tobi to make it happen...

However, the current Konoha history does not reflect what will actually be site canon. We are currently in the process of re-writing it to replace Hashirama and Tobirama with two completely AU Hokage.

It might be best, assuming you want to wait until a new Jōnin spot opens up, to either gloss over village history and not include stuff like that in things like promotion (simply go through the standard route of Chūnin Exams to being appointed a Jōnin) or wait until it has been written (we will announce the changes once they are made) before continuing. It's unlikely that a new Jōnin spot will open in Konoha in advance of Konoha's history changes being made.

Alternatively, you could revamp this character to another village. If you decide to do this and wish to include village history in your own, it would be worth speaking to their Kage/future Kage - chatango names are Hikotsu/Tosuke for Iwa [village history is in the history record too], Unbeing for Suna, Katasback for Kumo and AshuriiAkemi for Kusa [village history also in the history record]; for Kiri it would be best to speak to me, since I am writing its history.

I'm afraid that, for now, there are only three Jōnin Sensei spots in each village. Konoha's are filled but once the other villages start to fill up some more, there will be more spots opened up.