ISHIKAWA, TAJI - SUNA CHUNIN - FIN

[ISHIKAWA TAJI]

[atrb=width, 450, true][atrb=border, 0, true][atrb=valign,top][atrb=style, background: #242424; -moz-border-radius: 20px 20px 20px 20px; border-radius: 20px 20px 20px 20px; padding: 10px; font-family: calibri tahoma arial;, true, btable] Ishikawa Taji EVERYBODY STAND UP! General Information TODAY'S THE BEST TIME TO GET UP! ► Nicknames “Ta” ► Gender Male ► Age 21 Years ► Home Village Sunagakure ► Innate Affinity Fuuton ► Elemental Manipulation Fuuton ► Military Rank Chunin ► Shinobi Position Task Force ► Individual Rank [DO NOT EDIT THIS, STAFF WILL DECIDE] E, D, C, B, A, or S. Mental &Physical BEFORE MY EYES YOU STILL DON'T STOP! ► Appearance Taji is a lean man who stands at 5’11 and weighs in at 115 IBS. Honestly, he is rather unimposing next to most of his fellow shinobi. His body structure could even be called slightly feminine in a sense. His muscular definition definitely shows his slight lack of skill in taijutsu. His hands are rather large compared to the rest of him, crowned with long, thin fingers. Taji’s entire body is an open book to his already rough life as a shinobi. His arms and legs are marred with scars of various sizes, which stand out against his pale skin. Of course the first thing that is noticed by most people is his eye patch. He is completely missing his right eye, which he lost in a rather nasty fight when he was a genin, during his first attempt to pass the chunin exams, to a wrongly dodged kunai. The short diagonal scar across his eye (that runs from his upper cheek towards his eyebrow) is a constant reminder of the importance of staying focused on the battle field. Taji could be called handsome (in some regards). His features are slightly sharp with a rugged edge that gives him a ‘bad boy’ look. His eye has a subtle almond shape to them, and its dark grey color makes him no less appealing. His face is framed roughly with razor cut, choppy, hair. It’s a light pink in color. His bangs are cut long enough to fall in front of his eyes, and are longer in the center than on the sides. Taji’s style of dress is nothing all that eye catching. He wears black shinobi sandles (open toed but closed in the back), bandage leg wrappings that end halfway up his lower leg, black pants (with a kunai pouch strapped to his right thigh), two weapon pouches strapped to his back, under-armor mesh (long sleeved), a black sleeveless shirt, with a long sleeved black shirt that has a hood with a white swirl patterned stripe on it, black gloves with open tips on only the thumbs, and a standard suna shinobi vest. His headband is normally tied vertically on his head (the front turned to the left, slightly behind his ear with the tied part higher on the right side of his head). ► Mental Assessment Taji can be unbearably sarcastic at times. When he’s not on a mission (or other important jobs) he is a comedian of sorts, always trying to make light hearted jokes or puns. However, he is unquestionably loyal. He is a man who always puts the protection of his village first and foremost above everything else. He does have some strange quirks; including a strange obsession with sugar, a sight obsession with cleanliness, and a collection of weapons (mainly kunai) from different countries and lands. ► likes Cleanliness Sugar Sunagakure Jokes Sunsets ► dislikes Sever cold Crouds Rushing (haste) Taijutsu Festival Games ► positives Intelligent Loyal Funny (Debatable) Clean Helpful ► negatives Lacks Empathy Too focused on Cleanliness (sometimes) Tends to “Play the Fool” to escape unpleasant confrontation. Rude (too much sarcasm) Short Fuse ► Background Information Taji was born on one of the “all too common” hot, summer nights in suna. July 29 at 11:15, he took his first breath. His mother was a civilian, who had moved to the village many years before, from a small village along the coast. His father was a Sunagakure Jounin who specialized in puppet techniques, who met Taji’s mother at a small restaurant in the village. The two married a year after they met and Taji was born about two years after that. Taji does not have any siblings, or at least none that he knows about personally, but he wouldn’t deny that there is a slight possibility. His father died when he was young, 7 to be exact, the same year Taji had entered the ninja academy. He died an honorable death (on a mission), and though Taji has always been prideful of his father, his mother never seemed to feel anything more than grief over his death. One of taji’s fondest memories is going out to the desert and flying kites with his father. One of the kites that they flew together inspired the design for Taji’s first puppet, “Tako”, the puppet that he and his father designed and built together. Once it was built his father began teaching him about puppet techniques. ***”Tako (meaning ‘kite):” a small (about the height of taji’s thighs), light puppet that resembles a hawk, its wings are made of a light weight, razor sharp, chakra metal. It includes a hinged jaw (poision smoke and or senbon can be shot from here), a hollow body cavity (that holds a variety of weapons and explosive charges), and razor sharp talons.*** Taji spent a little over five years at the academy before he graduated at the age of 12, where he received tutoring for his puppet technique from a friend of his fathers, although the time he spent focusing on this caused him to fall behind in other areas. After that, he spent two years as a genin before entering the chunin exams. Taji failed the first time he entered the chunin exams he failed, after he miss dodged a kunai and severely injured his right eye, however, when he reentered the next exam he was able to complete them. His superiors, who admired how quickly he was able to recover, his perseverance, innovation, and ability to improvise, promoted him to chunin. Currently he is still a chunin, and has completed countless missions, and finds most enjoyment in being a team captin (though the these missions have been few and far between for him), he is also working on his second puppet (modeled after a dragon) that he calls “Ryujin.”

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Special Abilities
EVERYBODY HANDS UP!

► Special Traits

► Physical
[Speed]
His rather small, lighter build and long limbs give him a slight speed advantage.

► Special
[Puppeteer / Puppet Mastery]
Taji has, and has always had, a natural talent for puppet manipulation. His dexterity (through larger hands with long thin fingers) makes controlling puppets a simpler task for him, allowing him to pick up on it easily. He practices constantly, and has progressed to being able to control two puppets with relative ease.

Jutsu List
IT'S THE HIGHLY ANTICIPATED HERO'S COME BACK!

► Your Techniques

[--E--]
Bunshin No Jutsu - Clone Technique
Henge No Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Kawarimi No Jutsu - Body Replacement Technique
Nawanuke No Jutsu - Escape Technique
Kakuremino No Jutsu - Cloak of Invisibility Technique

[--D--]
Kage Shuriken no Jutsu | Shadow Shuriken Technique
Kanashibari no Jutsu | Temporary Paralysis Technique
Shunshin no Jutsu | Body Flicker Technique
Oboro Bunshin no Jutsu | Haze Clone Technique
Soushuriken no Jutsu | Manipulated Shuriken Technique.
Taioo no Jutsu | Body Flame Technique

[--C--]
Kugutsu no Jutsu | Puppet Technique
Chakura no Ito | Chakra Threads
Fuuton: Shinkuugyoku | Wind Release: Vacuum Sphere
Fuuton: Shinkuuha | Wind Release: Vacuum Wave
Fuuton: Daitoppa | Wind Release: Great Breakthrough

[--B--]
Fuuton: Shinkuu Taigyoku | Wind Release: Vacuum Great Sphere

[--A--]
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[--S--]
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Inventory
HOLD UP YOUR FINGERS AND COUNTDOWN!

► Weapons!

• Kunai - 10
  
• Shuriken - 12
  
• Explosive Tag - 10
  
  
• Tako (Puppet)

skill proficiency
3-2-1
► Shinobi Traits

► Skill Chakra Reserves
► Rank C
► points 2

► Skill Chakra Control
► Rank B
► points 3

► Skill Shunshin
► Rank B
► points 3

► Skill Ninjutsu
► Rank B
► points 3

► Skill Taijutsu
► Rank E
► points 0

► Skill Genjutsu
► Rank E
► points 0 0

► Skill Kugutsu no Jutsu
► Rank C
► points 2

OOC Information
MAKE SOME NOISE!

Outside Info, Yo!

► Face Claim
Ishikawa Taji – My custom OC FC

► Chatango Name
ichitaji

► Other Characters
None yet

► Special Position Claim
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Edited Template originally designed by solfege.

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[Shadow]

Pending

• First off, I can't see your images, and I have tried looking at it on both Modzilla firefox and Google chrome.
  
• Could you add in the extra 'u' in Fuuton under Innate Affinity and Elemental Manipulation? I am worried that people might misread that as Futton Although I am pretty sure I am the only one who is doing that.
  
• You say he uses puppets, but you have none in his inventory nor do you have any registered.
  
• special Position Claim is where you put if you have one of the special techniques or the bloodline traits listed in the Special Positions board, so you don't have to put anything there.
  
• You need to have your Ninjutsu Skill at B-Rank to have and use your B-Rank Jutsu.
  
• Also, I would run the paragraph sections of your app through spell check to pick up the spelling errors that I have noted as some can be quite confusing.

[ISHIKAWA TAJI]

• Fixed, sorry there was something wrong with Imageshack, i re uploaded them to tinypic.
  
• Added the "u".
  
• I added his puppet (linked to the weapon creation thread), i wasn't sure if i was supposed to add it there or not, since it was noted not to change it.
  
• I fixed the ninjutsu skill part.
  
• Unfortunately, im unable to use proboards spell check, it always gives me (This) message. I typed it up in microsoft, but the spellcheck on there only works so well.

[Shadow]

Pending

• I'll give approval once the puppet is approved.