Seidou Maboroshi l Kirigakure Chuunin l FIN

[Seidou Maboroshi]

[atrb=width, 450, true][atrb=border, 0, true][atrb=valign,top][atrb=style, background: #242424; -moz-border-radius: 20px 20px 20px 20px; border-radius: 20px 20px 20px 20px; padding: 10px; font-family: calibri tahoma arial;, true, btable] Maboroshi Seidou EVERYBODY STAND UP! General Information TODAY'S THE BEST TIME TO GET UP! ► Nicknames Sei ► Gender Female ► Age Eighteen (18) ► Home Village Kirigakure (Mist) ► Innate Affinity Suiton (Water) ► Elemental Manipulation N/A ► Military Rank Chūnin ► Shinobi Position Chūnin Task Force ► Individual Rank [DO NOT EDIT THIS, STAFF WILL DECIDE] E, D, C, B, A, or S. Mental &Physical BEFORE MY EYES YOU STILL DON'T STOP! ► Appearance Cheeky bastards aren't ya? Seidoui is a young silver/gray haired young woman with slick back shoulder length hair, and a grudge against all mankind. She has two small bangs that hang out across her face and above her eyes by a few centimeters, cut and slicked into small loops. Her eyes are hard-brown and carry a strange glimmer in them when the light reflects across her face, sometimes more emerald shaded than originally intended. With that out of the way, she lacks any make-up and instead allows nature to take its course, with untouched lips and no eye shadow what so ever. Seidou always wears a rather straight forward uniform or outfit, the most basic of training gear that contain a sleek black cotton uniform shirt and pants with a small net-linked between the left and right V-neck. A small red or blue sash across her waist line and a normal pair of straw and wood sandals on her feet. With nothing out of the ordinary in the sense of attire. Above that set of fundamentals she wears a large and overlapping black robe, opened outwards and wrapped back around her waist to keep the tail behind her. The neckline has a firmly wrapped red scarf or blue, (Depending on sash) that is neatly tucked in and twisted around to her left side. Unlike most Shinobi she doesn't adorn her headband and instead has a custom made cotton copy tucked into the side of the scarf. Easily noticed and rather flashy she often changes the color up to make it more noticeable by others, and around her right wrist and hand several bandages are neatly tucked and curled around her skin. To increase and augment her strength and grip. ► Mental Assessment Seidou's persona or psyche is quite a strange one to say the least. At times calm and caring about others, and easily distracted by the pain of her friends and at other times, crazed and lusting for war and death. These noticed mood swings are quite spread but when they happen or stick, and they can be extremely easy to spot and at often times avoided. Seidou is extremely intelligent in the senses of perception and understanding. Quite capable of making notice to the smallest of details and quickly adapting to these newly gathered details and bits of information. Seidou is also a capable reader and writer, quite often spending most if not all her off or vacation time writing books or small little notes. Information is a priceless commodity in her eyes and she's not one to be left in the dust, and to her reading and learning is the most powerful tool a Shinobi can possess. If you know more than the opponent knows about them, then who's better equipped to defeat them? This is the notion she lives by. Knowledge is key to the success of power and is also the downfall to the succession of life. Despite this, Seidou has a very poor understanding about how to express her emotions, and quite often begins to fumble about in social situations and very often questioning if she should even try. Never understanding her own heavily mixed feelings and the changes that happen with them. One minute liking someone and the next hating them more than anything. This leaves her to a more lonesome but enjoyable life. Spending her time alone and with her books, paper, pens, and scripts to fully enjoy all the information and certain gratification that these bring her. ► likes Pens & Writing. Books & Reading. Gathering Information. Being Alone & Peace in General. VENGENC- Rice....yes rice. ► dislikes How befuddled she is. Being Clumsy. Spiders. Sweets. Anything Sour. ► positives Intelligent. Perceptive. Protective. Honorable. Law Abiding. ► negatives Clumsy. Awkward. Moody. Extensive Mood Swings. Peaceful. ► Background Information► Background Information Childhood Seidou was born Seidou Sejimaru on the outskirts of Kirigakure and in a standard and fairly normal farming and trading community. Raised by her father & mother, Senka Sejimaru and Marusho Sejimaru. She was given the utmost care as a child due to frail and more so less than normal fragile body. Not only this but she always became ill and sick, and never seemed to get any better. This made her family worry and this resulted in a heavily sheltered life. Never treading far from home, she often only went as far as the fenced in yard and never more so. This only changing as she grew. Seidou was given anything she wanted, toys, books, and even friends if she desired. Yet she never wanted what other little girls or even boys wanted. They wanted dolls, action figures, and at times weapons. She wanted nothing but books, and literature. Spending nearly every waking moment of her heavily sheltered life in another world in her mind. As she neared the age of six, she had already mastered the ability to read and write to the point that she had begun to dabble in various other means to communicate. Often featuring writing up her own little language and quickly memorizing it as a means of code. This resulted in some very strange letters and pictures of her mother and father, during this time frame in her life. On one late summer day, she finally mustered up the courage to go just a bit further than normal, and ended up dead in the middle of two younger-Genin sparring in a nearby patch of grass. This enticed her, and resulted in the most violent and heavily lusting persona that at times takes prescience over her mind. During one point during the spar/match she was invited to join however lacked any knowledge of what they were doing. This resulting in her learning about the academy and Shinobi. Something she had never been introduced to before, this continued to peak her mind and eventually lead to her questioning and forcing her parents to allow her to join. Against heavily recommendations, she made her way into the path of a Shinobi. The Path Having recently joined the academy at a rather advanced age compared to most Shinobi. She was quickly taken in as one of their own for her immensely child like and often fruitful nature, but despite sitting alone and in a corner, she was often invited to join in, and was offered friendship of which she took. Seidou was a quick learner, in fact she knew most of which was instructed at the academy without ever actually knowing what it was. Due to her sheltered life she had nothing but her mind and the thousands of books she had managed to obtain. The teachers taking a liking to her, she was slightly advanced lessons to ensure that when the time came she would be on a level with others of her own age, and during the three year time frame in which she was in the academy. She took a heavy and enjoyable liking to the usage of weapons, any weapon she could muster the chance to use. She often did with an unnatural skill level. Capable of lugging around things she had only dreamed of. She found her body to be more responsive than originally thought, once only wishing she could leave her home without falling down. She was now lifting things nearly twice her weight and without breaking a sweat. This ensured her goals and path. She was going to continue like this, and show the world around her what she was really capable of doing. Spending what was once a time alone with books, now she spent it training her body along side her mind. Each day filled with intensive and often exhausting exercises coupled with spars, she had found herself a fruitful and curious lifestyle. Changing her name from Sejimaru to Maboroshi as a show to those around her and her family that she was no longer that frail little doe but was instead, a lethal and effectively trained young Shinobi. Genin and the Fray Seidou took to the Shinobi lifestyle quite quickly, having just recently escaped the restriction of the academy. She joined up with a respectable squad and took tutelage from a Jounin-instructor as all Shinobi did. Spending her once boring days in a classroom now on the field, and in high intensity and often brutal training and sparring sessions with her new squad mates. Unlike them, she lacked heavily in the arts of Ninjutsu and Genjutsu, and instead focused all her time on the advancement of Taijutsu and Kenjutsu. Quite literally taking them by surprise. Happily taking her place as the close range fighter of the group without waver. Seidou had finally found her perfect life, allowed freedom, and given responsibility. She was no longer kept hidden away and treated like a mere baby,but she was now a woman, and was treated as such. Each day a new mission and each day a new face. This was a perfect lifestyle and fitted her quite nicely, having taken up residence in a small shack on the near-ends of the Kirigakure stead. She took care of herself and only answered when she wanted. This was till the day it all changed, and she was expected to not only claim the lives of many but ensure that it was done so. The time of the exams. The Next Chapter Seidou was introduced into the exams by her instructor alongside her squad, who felt that it was time to force them into an exam that would truly test their level of skills not only as a single unit but as a squad. Life or death, it was up to them to earn either. This fragment in her memory was what truly awakened her darker side. The first day of the exam, it was cold, moist and foggy. It was Kirigakure was known for but it wasn't natural, it was man made for this particular type of warfare. You couldn't see more than a few feet in front of you and at the furthest you were forced to rely on your other senses. It was brutal, and it was made to be that way. It didn't take long before the lambs came to the slaughter, and every few miles you could see blood splattered across the green grass, brown mud, and the bark of various trees. Battles had been happening all around them, and they were lost and in the middle of hostile grounds. It made their blood pump, and rush through their veins. It was a new feeling of high, and they were starting to enjoy it. They now had to find a suitable target... Minutes turned into hours, and hours into days. They couldn't find anyone in that horrid mist, nothing at all, and it felt as if they were alone in the world, and the eerie quiet only continued to fuel this belief. Three days into the exam and with only two left to finish, they believed that they would never find the results they so desired. All before it happened, it was fresh. The blood on the ground was recent, and nearby they found not one but two cuts of flesh. At the most an hour old. It seemed like a god bless, maybe they just found not only a target but a weakened or even tired set of prey. Such an easy victory, right? They were wrong, they moved in quick and quiet. Her squad mates came around front, and told her to hold strong and watch. The eerie break of the mist, she waited...and waited, and nothing. Her friends never responded nor called to her. Seconds, in minutes, and minutes into an hour. It couldn't be taking this long? Could it, she questioned herself before moving in to investigate, and what she saw broke her down. They were dead, blood, limbs and guts poured out onto the ground. The nearby trees had been ripped apart, the ground looks like it had exploded outwards. Chips of hardened rock lay across the view. What could have caused this? Nearby, she saw the very piece of item they were requested to finish. Her ex-squads had been torn up and thrown away. They killed them for nothing?! It all happened so suddenly, her mind snapped, the lust for blood blistered like a raging bull. Her vision slowly faded...and nothingness took over. She didn't know long she felt that the world she had seeped into, only that it...felt good. Her vision slowly regained in a hazy state, blood splattered across her face, and clothes. The ground around her showed that of a struggle, ruptured organs spilled out across her feet. W-w-what happened? Near by she saw what was left of a body, warped and twisted. It looked mauled, like an animal had torn it apart. Did she do this? Her mind only questioned itself as she went into shock, and then she heard a voice. A small heckle for help, one of the nearly morphed bodies moved. It seemed as if it was crawling away.... No it wanted to but couldn't. Seidou approached, mind torn and a dark grin forming on her lips. She wanted to escape? She wanted help? Did her friends do this as they tore them apart.... Oh no, she wasn't getting any help. It happened so quickly, a quick twist of the neck, and a soft little pop. Items in hand, she continued on her way and into the next advancement of her life.

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Special Abilities
EVERYBODY HANDS UP!

► Special Traits

► Physical
Impressive Strength

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Seidou is rather small & slender for her size but despite this appearance she is rather physically set for strength, so much so that it seems nearly impossible for someone like her (build wise) capable of doing what she does. Seidou is extremely strong for her design and shows this rather well with her unique type of fighting.

Quite often combining the use of massive oversize weapons with the fusion of extremely quickly and often weight induced movements to perform immense damage in rapid succession.

Seidou is actually known for this particular type of fighting and shows a rather adept notion for it. Capable of drawing forth some of the largest weapons known to Shinobi and use them as if they were nothing but simple sheets of flimsy weightless paper.
► Special
Do you FEEL THAT?!
Seidou has a trait that's extremely difficult to miss in any situation. It's her killing intent, it's so potent and so powerful that it actually radiates off her body and expands outwards into the senses of anything or anyone nearby. This brutal notion forces the person or creature to recognize just how easy and how brutally she can turn on them in an instant. Showing those around them gruesome and inflicted images of their death in high and vivid detail when they turn their head to look at her.

This brutal intent can be felt even more as battles continue onward, an immense amount of blood lust surrounding her body and slowly seeping out and into the world. Each continued strike it expands and grows further and further as her more savage side begins to take over. No longer showing emotion and becoming nothing but a murderous shell of a once suitable human being. She becomes what you might consider a monster or a blood lusting demon.

Those trapped in this increasingly growing sense of death can begin to feel the side effects, their body growing heavy, their mind starting to slip. A never ending flooding of hatred and the sense of death crippling their senses, the smell of blood entering their nose, and the sound of slaughtering flooding their ears. The images of death flooding their vision. This is what makes Seidou so frightening. She doesn't care if you know how easily she'll come after you, no. Your own mind wants you to know why you should be scared of her, and with how much she's letting out. It's so easily picked up on.

Due to the nature of this trait, it has almost no effect of those of either a much higher degree of training/or experience, and thus who show no fear against death or being killed in battle. This is due to the aspect of fear placed into it, and because of this people who are of a higher willpower can easily break from it's grasp or not becomes affected at all. On an additonal note, this ability takes place nearly instantly or after a (single post) short while in combat as a slowly forming aura around the user's body. This taking the form of w/e animal the user decides.

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Jutsu List
IT'S THE HIGHLY ANTICIPATED HERO'S COME BACK!

► Your Techniques

[--E--](6)
Bunshin No Jutsu - Clone Technique
Henge No Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Kawarimi No Jutsu - Body Replacement Technique
Nawanuke No Jutsu - Escape Technique
Kakuremino No Jutsu - Cloak of Invisibility Technique

][--D--](7)
Kirigiri: Yarinami | Spear Wave
Kirigiri: Kadounami | Vortex Wave
Kirigiri: Atsugiri | Thick Cut
Kirigiri: Hokunami | North Wave
Kirigiri: Nannami | South Wave
Kirigiri: Seinami | West Wave
Supin'auto | Spin-out

[--C--](5)
Kirigiri: Mizugiri | Water Cutting
Kirigiri: Mizunami | Liquid Wave
Kirigiri: Mizumune | Swordback Jet
KirigiriKirigiri: Suidansame | Water Bullet Rain
Tachiagari Hiza | Rising Knee

[--B--](1)
Hiken: Tsukikage | Secret Sword: Moon Shadow]

[--A--](0)

[--S--](0)

[Unique]

]Inventory
HOLD UP YOUR FINGERS AND COUNTDOWN!

► Weapons!

• Kunai - 10
  
• Shuriken - 12
  
• Explosive Tag - 10
  
• Cleaver Sword - 1
  

[bskill proficiency
3-2-1
► Shinobi Traits

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► Skill CHAKRA RESERVES
► Rank B
► points 3

► Skill CHAKRA CONTROL
► Rank B
► points 3

► Skill SHUNSHIN
► Rank B
► points 3

► Skill NINJUTSU (Cap at C)
► Rank E
► points 0

► Skill TAIJUTSU
► Rank C
► points 2

► Skill GENJUTSU (Cap at C)
► Rank E
► points 0

► Skill BUKIJUTSU/KENJUTSU
► Rank C+
► points 2
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OOC Information
MAKE SOME NOISE!

Outside Info, Yo!

► Face Claim

Seidou Maboroshi | Kingdom Hearts | Larxene
► Chatango Name
liSpiceil

► Other Characters
Waokīngu Sukii (Closing Her Down)

► Special Position Claim
N/A

Edited Template originally designed by solfege.

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[Me]

There's a few grammar, spelling, and syntax mistakes, but those that can be quickly filled in by delicate reading, so i won't take points off for that, but i advise you to double check to make sure the easier to catch mistakes are caught.

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[Seidou Maboroshi]

Ya. When I did this I kind of kept editing it repeatedly and ended up making a bit of a mess. I'll fix it up shortly.

[Akemi]

You have a ton of sentence fragments - it'd be nice if you could fix at least some of them.

Remove the instructional paragraph in the inventory section.

And please include a 100 x 100 icon that we can use for the roster so we don't have to find/make one.

[Seidou Maboroshi]

I am completely redoing this. Just letting you guys know. It didn't turn out as I hoped and will be attempting to fix that.

[haywire]

In that case, please replace the [FIN] in the title with a [WIP] until you're done.

[Seidou Maboroshi]

I think, I've already finished.

[Berugu Kosui]

Still quite a few grammar mistakes/sentence fragments throughout this entire thing. Please run through this and fix them. Other than that it's fine.

Pending 1/2

[Seidou Maboroshi]

Touched it up, let me know what you think. Originally I rushed it with plans to proofread and touch up later.

[Berugu Kosui]

Approved

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[Akemi]