Katsuro Takashi FIN

[Kaguya Katsuro]

[atrb=width, 450, true][atrb=border, 0, true][atrb=valign,top][atrb=style, background: #242424; -moz-border-radius: 20px 20px 20px 20px; border-radius: 20px 20px 20px 20px; padding: 10px; font-family: calibri tahoma arial;, true, btable] Kaguya Katsuro EVERYBODY STAND UP! General Information TODAY'S THE BEST TIME TO GET UP! ► Nicknames The Demon in White, The White Samurai and the Unstoppable Force ► Gender Male ► Age 25 ► Home Village Kirigakure No Sato ► Innate Affinity Raiton ► Elemental Manipulation ► Clan Kaguya ► Military Rank Jonin ► Shinobi Position Hunter Nin ► Individual Rank B-Rank Mental &Physical BEFORE MY EYES YOU STILL DON'T STOP! ► Appearance Katsuro is not exactly a massive person, standing at only a mere six feet tall, but his body is completely lean and wired, making an untrained eye look like he was weak. Katsuro has onyx black hair, that is extremely messy and rather unkept, which often cover his piercing ice blue eyes and if anyone manages to see Katsuro outside of his small home they would see him wearing a very simple set up, wearing the common Kaguya clothing. If Katsuro is on a mission, he wears his ANBU mask of a white demon, but still wears a very similar clothes as his Kaguya clothing, as that is what he has been use to wearing over the years and rarely needs to wear anything else. This usually is made up of wore a specialised version of the traditional Kiri-Nin ensemble, consisting of a light lavender, loose-fitting, long-sleeved, zip-up shirt, black pants cut off around mid-calf, bandages wrapped around his ankles, and traditional shinobi sandals. ► Mental Assessment Katsuro's motto in fighting is simple " If you fight me, you have already lost. " This shows most of what you need to know about Katsuro if you try and fight him. Katsuro believes in using the least amount of effort to get the most results, something that got him a very good friend and a good job. Kat has been known to be very lazy though, at times, caring very little for matters that not affect him, often sleeping in late and never really changing out of his clothes. Katsuro has been known for his silence and rarely talks but when you do get him to talk has been known for being very charming when he needs to be, along with talkative about issues the he deems important or needed to be said. Kat often prefers to kill his opponents, but if he is given the order to return them to Kiri he follows it with an immeasurable amount of loyalties. Though due to his experiences of his past, he refuses to fight or even hurt a female, even Shiniobi unless they attack him first. While this does not often effect his job, it could very well effect him in the future. This also puts a massive strain on him to protect the women on the Kiri village, due to the fact that he doesn't want anyone to feel the way he felt after watching his love die in front of him. ► likes Combat Taijustu Protecting Kiri Killing Protecting Women ► dislikes Self-destructive women Men who hurt women Traitors of Kiri ► positives Loyal Smart Quick on his feet Determined Unbreakable ► negatives Often blinded by the goal Stubborn Unchanging Prone to solving problems with blood Un-fearing of Death ► Background Information Katsuro grew up in a normal family,well as normal as the Kaguya can get, and wanted to be a great ninja as all young boys want. As he grew up, along side a little girl named Keiko. These kids grew up in the same part of town, had the same interest the whole nine years but they were too young to know love. As they grew up, they became only closer and closer. She was going up to be a medical ninja, while Katsuro wanted to become one of the legendary Hunter Nin. As they grew up together, they started to fall in love but it would not last long. One day, when they were both eleven Katsuro and her were holding hands and walking down the streets. Either of them had become a ninja yet, but Katsuro knew enough about Taijustu to easily beat just about any chunnin but it was his skill in the basic ninjustu like transformation justu that he never got the hang of so he was still there until he could get it. As they passed by one of the many alleys that were in The Hidden Mist, a group of men of five strong grabbed them both and threw them into the ally. They easily split them apart, while one man held Katsuro down to stop him from stopping what the men where doing. They already had Keiko down and was started to rip and tear off clothing. They were going to rape her, and he knew that because they ran a another knife down between her legs to open up a slit to get access to that part. Keiko would not stop screaming, and they tried to cover her mouth and they told her Shut fucking hell up bitch, or you will die! Though Keiko, being herself bite the man's hand and then screamed even louder. The leading man, using the same knife he used to cut her pants he used to cut Kieko's throat. As her blood spilled over her body, the men started to rape her. As Katsuro watched her rape her dying body, the light in her eyes had not even gone away before they started to rape her and her eyes showed even more pain as they did it, and something inside him snapped and the flood gates opened. Before he knew that was happening, his Kekkai Genkai was activated. The man that was holding him down, saw that Kat's eyes had changed and the only words he got out was What the F... before his head was rolling on the ground, blood spraying from his neck covering him in blood. The rest of the men heard the thud of their partner, and they looked back to see a boy, covered in blood, standing there with a what looked to be a pure white blade, also covered in blood. One of them was stupid enough to try and get to his feet to attack Kat, at which point Kat slash his body from his left shoulder to his right hip. How the man screamed. A group of ninja arrived, less then thirty seconds after hearing the scream and they saw four dead men, covered in swords wounds and a body, covered in so much blood that it was dripping from his hair, standing over a man begging for his life. Katsuro just smiled, a cold smile as he slammed his sword into the man's heart, the sword coming out at his spine. As he man fell over, Katsuro's sword still in him, he would look up at the ninja and they would see his Kekkai Genkai. The immense power of the Kaguya Clan's newest repentance of Shikotsumyaku. Katsuro was taken away for questioning, and was brought forth before the sage and was asked why he killed the three men. He just smiled and said They needed to be killed. As if those men were now less then human and worthless, not even worth the blood that had now stained Sin's clothes. They looked into it, as Katsuro's allowed them into his mind to get information, they way that what he did was in self-defense... more or less. Katsuro was released, though they did keep a close eye on him even while he trained his new Kekkai Genkai, under the training of his clan in that art which they quickly figured out he was way ahead of any record says he should be at. Katsuro grew quickly at that point, though the happy demeanor changed into a cold man, that seems to turn into a one that seemed to have one thing to live for and that was to protect those he cared about, which for him was his village and only his village. This made him a prime applicate for the ANBU, which was quickly accepted not as a Chunnin, and he quickly rose though the ranks as his personal style of fighting allowed most escaped ninjas or threats to seemly die to him and his squad members. Kat only grew in strength and speed and respect in the Hidden Mist as he seemed to do any mission they ever ask of him, no matter the mission as if he didn't fear death any longer, or he had just gotten so use to the feeling at such a young age that he no longer cares.

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Special Abilities
EVERYBODY HANDS UP!

► Special Traits

► Physical
Silent Killing Techique: As the name suggests, this technique is simply a very quiet method of killing an opponent, usually from behind with a blade. Additionally, because the user moves silently, it cannot be defended against, because the attack cannot be anticipated. The user will often slit their opponent's throat, preventing any cry that might give them away. The Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist are shown to be masters of this technique, and were even good enough to track and kill opponents through sound alone.

Katsuro is also a master at this technique, good enough that he can even close his eyes and follow a target though sound alone and even make no noise as he moves around. This is one of the many reasons why Katsuro is one of the most deadly Hunter Nin in Kiri.

Taijustu Expert: The Kaguya is well known for their ability in Taijustu and is extremely feared in that area of expertise due to the sheer augmentation that their bloodline gives. This is only reinforced and increased massively by the simple fact that Katsuro is one of the most proficient users of his bloodline in an extremely long time.

Intense Strength, Speed and Endurance: Katsuro has trained his body to be a perfect killing machine, and he does this by using his own Kekkei Genkai to force his body to become stronger and faster. He did this by causing thick and heavy layers of bones and then he would go on the same running thing as every other ANBU, and often even out running them even with this extra weight on this body.



► Special
Shikotsumyaku: is the unique kekkei genkai that allows one to control the bone growth and properties of ones skeletal system. This is achieved by infusing chakra into their calcium, one can manipulate ones own bones in a variety of ways. Such examples would range from short swords, to bone bullets, to even bone armor. This kekkei genkai is extremely rare even among the Kaguya clan. It is also met with sever scrutiny and fear; by the other clansmen, to anyone who has it. People who have this kekkei genkai also have very different and unique skeletal structure so that if advanced medical help is next to impossible due to their being not enough information on the effects of the kekkei genkai.

Katsuro is extremely potent in this Kekkei Genkai, as he is well above where he should be by miles due to his focus on specializing into this field. Due to this specialization it allows him to create and deconstruct his own powers in moments, allowing him to make both a powerful and quick offense and defense

Jutsu List
IT'S THE HIGHLY ANTICIPATED HERO'S COME BACK!

► Your Techniques

[--E--]
Bunshin No Jutsu - Clone Technique
Henge No Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Kawarimi No Jutsu - Body Replacement Technique
Nawanuke No Jutsu - Escape Technique
Kakuremino No Jutsu - Cloak of Invisibility Technique

[--D--]
Kage Shuriken no Jutsu | Shadow Shuriken Technique
Kanashibari no Jutsu | Temporary Paralysis Technique
Kirigakure no Jutsu | Hiding in Mist Technique
[Ryū Setsu] | [Dragon Knuckle]
Teshi Sendan | Ten Finger Drilling Bullets
[Supin'auto] | [Spin-out]

[--C--]
[Ken no Jisoku Kikai] | [Rapid Machine Fists]
Yanagi no Mai | Dance of the Willow
Koukotsu Kote| Bone Gauntlet
Yoroi Kinkin | Armor Piercing
Kuudou Chobo | Hollow Point

[--B--]
[Nenshō Hayabusa Panchi] | [Combusting Falcon Punch]
Karamatsu no Mai | Dance of the Larch
[Sōdaina Shōgeki] | [Grand Impact]
Sukeruton| [Enhanced Endoskeleton]

[--A--]
Sawarabi no Mai | Dance of the Seedling Fern

[--S--]

Inventory
HOLD UP YOUR FINGERS AND COUNTDOWN!

► Weapons!

• Kunai - 10
  
• Shuriken - 12
  
• Explosive Tag - 10

skill proficiency
3-2-1
► Shinobi Traits

E-Rank
D-Rank
C-Rank
B-Rank
A-Rank
S-Rank

► Skill Chakra Reserves
► Rank B-Rank
► points 3

► Skill Chakra Control
► Rank B-Rank
► points 3

► Skill Shunshin
► Rank A-Rank
► points 4

► Skill Ninjutsu [Capped@C-Rank]
► Rank D-Rank
► points 1

► Skill Taijutsu
► Rank B-Rank
► points 2

► Skill Genjutsu [Capped@C-Rank]
► Rank E-Rank
► points 0

► Skill Kekkei Genkai
► Rank A+ -Rank
► points 4

OOC Information
MAKE SOME NOISE!

Outside Info, Yo!

► Face Claim
Katsuro Takashi/Spike Spiegel/Cowboy bebop
► Chatango Name
Sinpoder

► Other Characters
Kiba Takashi

► Special Position Claim
Bone Pulse

Edited Template originally designed by solfege.

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[Akemi]

No elemental manipulation at all with D-Rank nin, and certainly not two natures. And seeing as you don't even have any elemental techs, just remove the elements you listed.

I'd like you to describe "common Kaguya clothing," because I really have no idea what that is.

You're still calling Katsuro "Joshuya" in at least one or two places, so fix that. And your overall grammar and spelling could use a little work.

You need to remove the part in your special abilities about him channeling lightning chakra to his bones because he can't do that if you have D-Rank nin.

[Kaguya Katsuro]

I edited it... as far as I can tell..

[haywire]

Remove "Konoha Senpuu | Leaf Whirlwind" from jutsu listings as this has the Strong Fist practitioner prerequisite (which is not met). Also, remove the -Open Slot- placeholders from that list.

Also, can you take away the strikethrough tags from the Genjutsu skill and put it as E-Rank with 0 points? You have B-Rank Chakra Control so it should be unlocked.

[haywire]

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