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Post by Kojima Yone on Jul 1, 2013 14:06:38 GMT -5
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General Information TODAY'S THE BEST TIME TO GET IT UP! ► NicknamesBones ► GenderMale ► Age13 ► Home VillageKirigakure ► Innate AffinityRaiton ► Elemental ManipulationN/A ► ClanKaguya ► Military RankGenin ► Shinobi Position Sanbutai ► Individual Rank[DO NOT EDIT THIS, STAFF WILL DECIDE] E, D, C, B, A, or S.
Mental &Physical BEFORE MY EYES YOU STILL DON'T STOP! ► Appearance
Always cheerful and with a smile on his face, Hashi is a well kept and sweet looking boy. He usually wears a mix between lightly colored long sleeved shirt and a pair of dark pants. While the clothes are perfect fit, they still are easy to move around in and not slowing down Hashi's movements. He doesn't care much about his appearance, focusing more on comfort that how well he looks so his clothing adapts usually to the given moment. He still refuses to wear large coats even in the winter, as he believes they would weight too much and slow down his movement and reactions which he would not approve off.
Not caring much about his looks, Hashi has longish for a boy and always messy blond hard as well as honey brown big eyes which could be considered quite cute. Together with his slim yet athletic body, Hashi comes across as swift and quick which portrays his skill set well. He wears his head protector as a scarf around his neck as while he isn't afraid of getting hit, he still believes he should defend a part of the body that is most open to deadly attack. ► Mental Assessment
Rarely seen angry or without a smile, Hashi is a rather cheerful individual who enjoys company of others as well as some free time. While he does love peace, he would much rather spend time with friends socializing or training together. Hashi is just one of these people who considers everyone his friends and can usually befriend anyone and anywhere. Its that optimistic attitude which led him to becoming overly excitable, getting overly happy with minor things and feeling the need of telling everyone around him.
Hashi enjoys training with people more that alone. As a matter of fact he preforms much better with people looking over him, as he does feel the need to prove others that he is, or rather will be famous some day. His techniques are usually flashy but quick, not giving the opponent even the slightest opening usually leading to a quick fight where either side wins.
Hashi dislikes pointless work which can be easily avoided or which will lead to nothing, hence at times he chooses to avoid some of the more boring responsibility, going swimming, playing games or simply chatting to girls. While Hashi gets along with most people, the female gender seems to enjoy him more as he is a pretty open person compared to other guys, with the additional fact that Hashi is actually a huge pervert. While its true that most of his friends are female, Hashi does have a few good male friends.
While Hashi does love fighting and training, he dislikes the idea of taking another person's life unless its absolutely necessary. In fact if possible, he tends to avoid pointless combat which often leaves him at a disadvantage due to the opponent making the first move. In addition he is very loyal, and even despite the previous point, if an ally or a friend is attacked, he would consider it a necessity to kill the attacker solely to save his comrade. ► likes- Being better than you
- Speed
- Women
- Food
- Power
► dislikes- Weaklings
- Red heads
- Idiots
- Losing
- Cocky people
► positives- Plenty of confidence
- Charming
- Funny
- Awesome
- Better than you
► negatives- Cocky
- Overconfident
- Underestimates everyone
- Easily amused
- Can get annoyed easily
► Background InformationEveryone has dreams. Something they look forward to in near future and a goal they want to achieve. Some are willing to sacrifice more than others, while some are willing to give up their life's to in the end achieve what they were set out to be. In Hashi's case, ever since he was born he had one goal. He wanted to become the best shinobi that was ever to walk the ground, breathe the air. His goal was simple yet wanted by so many people, he wanted for everyone to look up to him and know who he was. It was something rather hard to achieve leaving in an orphanage with tens of other kids having the same dream, but unlike them Hashi knew that he was different. He was stronger, faster and much better at fighting ever since he was a little infant than the other kids. His reactions were much faster than anyone his age, to the point where each person trying to attack him moved in what seemed to be like slow motion. The medical ninja of the village liked to call this ability Nerve Sympathrophy, however to a little five year old child like Hashi it made no sense. Either way, he trained as a Kaguya. The ninja would make him painful yet necessary training exercises on the poor little child, however Hashi knew that it was all to make him better, not healthier but stronger.
At the age of six, Hashi had already amazing control over his bones, and that's when he was signed up to the academy. It was finally the life he wanted to lead ever since he was a baby, walking in the steps of all the Kage's who had to start by being trained by the academy teachers to later progress in the ranks and become the best in the village. Hashi knew he had to work hard to be the best, and since it all came quite naturally to him, it was pretty simple to come out of the Academy with perfect scores, excelling in Taijutsu with skill seen once in a million years. Even tho Hashi was only eleven, his taijutsu was remarkable. He was capable of beating advanced genin as well as some chuunin hands down without getting as much as a scratch. He is now hoping to prove to the Mizukage that his skills are much too advanced to stay as a genin and enter the next chuunin exams to take the next step in achieving greatness.
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[/justify] [/div] Special Abilities EVERYBODY HANDS UP! ► Special Traits ► Physical
[Senses] Being used to fight under the effect of mist, which makes fighting using just sight impossible, Hashirama learned how to take advantage off other senses in a fight. He doesn't need to see the opponent to know where he is, as he can use his other senses which are honed to extreme allowing him to continue fighting even under the Kirigakure no Jutsu without being affected as well as it makes it harder to assassinate.
[Experienced] Brawling a lot ever since he was a child, Hashirama is used to fighting people especially larger and stronger than him. He is capable of react faster, accounting for the opponent's next movement as well as take more damage than average shinobi due to being used to pain and being beaten up. All this experience shows in battle leaving Hashi with an unbreakable will to carry on even when the situation may seem pointless and lost.
► Special [Dead Bone Pulse] As a part of the Kaguya clan, Hashirama has inherited the ability to control his steel hard bones to the point where he can allow them to exit his body weather to create a sword or for simple protection at will without an actual need for a jutsu. [Allows Kekkei Genkai]
Jutsu List IT'S THE HIGHLY ANTICIPATED HERO'S COME BACK! ► Your Techniques
[--E--] Bunshin No Jutsu - Clone Technique Henge No Jutsu - Transformation Technique Kawarimi No Jutsu - Body Replacement Technique Nawanuke No Jutsu - Escape Technique Kakuremino No Jutsu - Cloak of Invisibility Technique
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[--S--]
Inventory HOLD UP YOUR FINGERS AND COUNTDOWN! ► Weapons!- Kunai - 10
- Shuriken - 12
- Explosive Tag - 10
skill proficiency 3-2-1 ► Shinobi Traits E-Rank D-Rank C-Rank B-Rank A-Rank S-Rank Sub-Skill Listings► Skill Chakra Reserves ► Rank D ► points1 ► Skill Chakra Control ► Rank D ► points1 ► Skill Shunshin ► Rank C ► points2 ► Skill Ninjutsu ► Rank D ► points1 ► Skill Taijutsu ► Rank C ► points2[clan] ► Skill Kekkei Genkai ► Rank D ► points1 OOC Information MAKE SOME NOISE! Outside Info, Yo! ► Face Claim Kaguya Hashirama | HYOUKA | Masashi Tōgaito ► Chatango Name Mobui
► Other Characters N/A
► Special Position Claim Dead Bone Pulse
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Post by sirena on Jul 1, 2013 16:00:32 GMT -5
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- As you have no history you have to start at D rank meaning you have no jutsu except for the E ranks. If you want to add some history I would do so now.]
- Your Special Abilities section of your app at the end of each one you have put a +1 to certain stats remove all that in that part you put how well your shinobi performs in a certain art or if they have good hearing no extra stats.
- Genin D or C rank still only get 7 points to start with and none of these can go over C rank. You can keep the clan one but remove the skill +1 one stuff.
- Remove the D rank jutsu since no history.
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Post by Kojima Yone on Jul 1, 2013 16:08:57 GMT -5
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Post by sirena on Jul 1, 2013 16:22:12 GMT -5
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- Well since this is your first character just spotted that you can not claim a KG or special ability until, All applicants must have at least one Genin before applying for any position here.
All applicants must have atleast one non-solo threads completed before applying for any position here.
Please read Here
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Post by Kojima Yone on Jul 1, 2013 18:58:21 GMT -5
Done.
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Post by sirena on Jul 1, 2013 19:58:50 GMT -5
you need to have completed one active full thread with another member first not just have another genin
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Post by sirena on Jul 12, 2013 12:04:30 GMT -5
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Post by haywire on Jul 16, 2013 8:28:04 GMT -5
You need C-Rank Ninjutsu to have an Elemental Manipulation. Please remove Raiton from this. To clarify, keep Raiton in "Innate Affinity" as it is still his affinity but he has not learned to control it yet.
You have one too many skill points, please fix this.
Please remove Nerve Sympathropy/Nerve Symatropy (each time it was named, the spelling was different >_>) and all references to it. It has no effect ICly (since reaction speed is dictated by Shunshin Rank and special abilities such as this have no bearing on that) and serves no real purpose plot-wise either, as far as I can see. It might also be worth factoring in that it makes no sense biologically/medically and that it would likely affect several people in each village (0.5% of the population is still one in every two hundred, which is an exceptionally large proportion of people for a genetic mutation)...
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Post by Kojima Yone on Jul 16, 2013 10:05:55 GMT -5
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Post by haywire on Jul 16, 2013 11:59:46 GMT -5
Thanks. Once you have a thread complete with your other character, post a link to it here and this will get its 2/2. ^_^
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Post by Hatake Sōra on Aug 31, 2013 16:44:36 GMT -5
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Post by Akemi on Aug 31, 2013 16:46:30 GMT -5
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