Kiba Takahashi

[Kiba Takahashi]

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Special Abilities
EVERYBODY HANDS UP!

► Special Traits

► Physical
None

► Special
None

Jutsu List
IT'S THE HIGHLY ANTICIPATED HERO'S COME BACK!

► Your Techniques

[--E--]
Bunshin No Jutsu - Clone Technique
Henge No Jutsu - Transformation Technique
Kawarimi No Jutsu - Body Replacement Technique
Nawanuke No Jutsu - Escape Technique
Kakuremino No Jutsu - Cloak of Invisibility Technique

Inventory
HOLD UP YOUR FINGERS AND COUNTDOWN!

► Weapons!

• Kunai - 10
  
• Shuriken - 12
  
• Explosive Tag - 10

skill proficiency
3-2-1
► Shinobi Traits

E-Rank
D-Rank
C-Rank
B-Rank
A-Rank
S-Rank

► Skill Chakra Reserves
► Rank C-Rank
► points 2

► Skill Chakra Control
► Rank C-Rank
► points 2

► Skill Shunshin
► Rank D-Rank
► points 1

► Skill Ninjutsu
► Rank D-Rank
► points 1

► Skill Taijutsu
► Rank D-Rank
► points1

► Skill Genjutsu
► Rank [Unlocked @ B-Rank Chakra Control]
► points

OOC Information
MAKE SOME NOISE!

Outside Info, Yo!

► Face Claim
Kiba Takashashi | Rosario+Vampire | Aono Tsukune
► Chatango Name
Sinpoder

► Other Characters
None

► Special Position Claim
None

Edited Template originally designed by solfege.

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[Berugu Kosui]

Remove the quote tags at the top and bottom of the profile.

You need 3 100x100 icons at the top of the profile

Fix the picture url so it actually shows the picture, not just a hyperlink

Since you have no history there's no way to explain why he has a heightened sense of hearing. Take that part out.

Remove the instruction paragraphs in the weapon and skill point sections.

EDIT: Also, we need more than a pic for appearance. Height, weight, build, etc. What they wear, any distinguishing marks, so on and so forth.

[Kiba Takahashi]

Alright.. I fixed it....

[Berugu Kosui]

Need some more on the physical appearance. Five feet is cool, but is he skinny, fat, somewhere in between? Also, wearing a suit isn't something most, if any, shinobi is going to wear, especially on a regular basis. Fix that as well.

Your coding is also messed up in the weapons sections, take a look at it.

[Kiba Takahashi]

Fixed

[Berugu Kosui]

Approved

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[Akemi]