Kazeoni no ha, FIN, personal

[Tsubasa Chinatsu]

Technique Name:

[Kazeoni no Ha: Tōboe] | [Blade of the Wind Demon: Howling]

Technique's Label: personal
Technique Prerequisites:
-Chakra Reactive metal
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu/Kenjutsu
Elemental Nature: Fuuton
Hand-Seals: 4
Speed of Technique: n/a
Chakra Consumption: n/a
Description:

A supplementary technique to all of the other Kazeoni techniques. Before using any of the other techniques, the user performs the necessary handseals before placing their hands on their sheathed blade and gathering fuuton chakra into it. Upon drawing the blade it will seemingly howl as though a strong wind was blowing.

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Technique Name:

[Kazeoni no Ha: Daippo] | [Blade of the Wind Demon: First Step]

Technique's Label: personal
Technique Prerequisites: none
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Elemental Nature: none
Hand-Seals: none
Speed of Technique: n/a
Chakra Consumption: n/a
Description:

As the opponent rushes at them, the user readies themselves and stands their ground. As the opponent comes close, the user then steps forward and strikes in a horizontal slash that would break through the opponent's open guard, effectively making the first strike.

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Technique Name:

[Kazeoni no Ha: Youdou] | [Blade of the Wind Demon: Feint]

Technique's Label: personal
Technique Prerequisites: none
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Elemental Nature: none
Hand-Seals: none
Speed of Technique: n/a
Chakra Consumption: n/a
Description:

The user distracts the opponent with their blade, forcing them to block before drawing a hidden kunai and attacking.

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Technique Name:

[Kazeoni no Ha: Dainigeki] | [Blade of the Wind Demon: Second Strike]

Technique's Label: personal
Technique Prerequisites: none
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Elemental Nature: Fuuton
Hand-Seals: none
Speed of Technique: n/a
Chakra Consumption: n/a
Description:

After employing First Step, the user steps around their stricken opponent, performing a small spin as though dodging maneuver before stepping to their side, they then strike again. Immediately the user turns their blade as if intending to stab making the second strike.

Is possible to skip first step

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Technique Name:

[Kazeoni no Ha: Daisankaze] | [Blade of the Wind Demon: Third Wind]

Technique's Label: personal
Technique Prerequisites: none
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Elemental Nature: none
Hand-Seals: none
Speed of Technique: n/a
Chakra Consumption: n/a
Description:

After second strike, the user spins around to the back of their opponent, As they come out of their spin they strike with their non-dominant hand back towards their own back in a diagonally upwards slash. This time they bring both hands up onto the blade directly afterwards before slashing it with more speed and power downward diagonally. Then the user will once more go directly for stab making the third strike.

If opponent is quick, he can disarm the user before they get in the second slash and/or their dominant hand on the blade.

Is possible to skip first step and second strike.

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Technique Name:

[Kazeoni no Ha: Saishū no Karu] | [Blade of the Wind Demon: Final Hunt]

Technique's Label: personal
Technique Prerequisites:
C-Rank Shunshin
Rank: C
Type: Kenjutsu
Elemental Nature: none
Hand-Seals: none
Speed of Technique: n/a
Chakra Consumption: n/a
Description:

After taking several steps back, the user takes their blade in both hands before rushing at the disoriented opponent. They aim to strike the opponent while rushing past to deal slicing damage to the abdomen. The user will then make a sharp turn to bonce back and strike again like this twice more before going back in to deal a stab to the heart.

A well placed leg or wire can trip the user.

Is possible to skip first step, second strike, and third wind.

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[haywire]

[Kazeoni no Ha: Daippo] | [Blade of the Wind Demon: First Step] - Aside from a couple of writing mistakes, there are two main issues with this; firstly, this seems very much an Iaidō move, which is Samurai-only. Secondly, Chakra Flow is A-Rank without a chakra-reactive material and C-Rank with, so either bump the rank up or specify that the weapon must be made of a chakra-reactive material.

[Kazeoni no Ha: Youdou] | [Blade of the Wind Demon: Feint] - As above, bump the rank up to A or specify that the weapon used must be made of a chakra-reactive material.

[Kazeoni no Ha: Dainigeki] | [Blade of the Wind Demon: Second Strike] - And again, bump the rank up to A or specify that the weapon used must be made of a chakra-reactive material.

[Kazeoni no Ha: Daisankaze] | [Blade of the Wind Demon: Third Wind] - Bump the rank up to A or specify that the weapon used must be made of a chakra-reactive material. Also, what do you mean by dexterous hand and non-dexterous hand?

[Kazeoni no Ha: Saishū no Karu] | [Blade of the Wind Demon: Final Hunt] - Remove A-Rank Ninjutsu from the prerequisites; this goes without saying as it is an A-Rank Ninjutsu.

For the sake of tidiness, can you remove "a sword of some kind" and "basic kenjutsu" from the prerequisites? The requirement of a sword goes without saying and the kenjutsu requirement is automatically equal to the rank of the jutsu, since it is kenjutsu. "Basic kenjutsu" is too vague anyway; it should specify a rank if it were necessary.

[Tsubasa Chinatsu]

dexterous as in your dominant hand, aka are you right handed or left handed.... yeah I could have worded that better. As for the other edits I'll get on that.

[haywire]

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Yeah, "dexterous" means done with dexterity, skilfully with one's hands, or generally agile or skilfully. It can occasionally be used (though rarely) to mean specifically "right", since its root is the Latin word "dexter", meaning "right". It cannot, however, be used to mean "left". It cannot be used interchangeably with the word "dominant" in the context of hand dominance.

English lesson over. xD

[Tsubasa Chinatsu]

Ahaha, yeah that happens. I thought that because of ambidextrous meaning skillful with both hands, or something along those lines. I fixed it anyway.

I also editted all of the present techniques into simpler versions and added another called howling.

[haywire]

Aight. Looks good. ^_^


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