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Post by kata2 on Sept 18, 2013 13:02:24 GMT -5
Technique Name: [Bakuton: Handou] | [Explosion Release: Kick] Technique Prerequisites: -- Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Kekkei Genkai Elemental Nature: Bakuton Hand-Seals: N/A Speed of Technique: -- Chakra Consumption: Low, Medium, Large, Immense Description: Similar to the Landmine Fist, a Bakuton user will channel chakra to their feet and upon impact with a surface, be it human or inanimate, an explosion will occur. The radius and force are dependent on how much chakra is sent to the feet. Because of the force generated and the unbalance of the user standing on one leg they will also get blown back. Low chakra consumption entails a 2 meter blast radius, slight impairment [1/2 post] and 2x Kunai speed. Medium chakra consumption entails a 6 meter blast radius, noticeable impairment and possible loss of digits [1 post] 3.5x Kunai speed. Large chakra consumption entails a 15 meter blast radius, concussive force confuses and impairs significantly. Loss of limbs likely to occur. [2 posts] 5x Kunai speed. Immense chakra consumption entails a 25 meter blast radius. Unconsciousness, [3 posts] and loss of limbs a certainty. 6x Kunai speed. Technique Name: [Bakuton: Sobou Hitsu] | [Explosion Release: Hard Head] Technique Prerequisites: -- Rank: B Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Kekkei Genkai Elemental Nature: Bakuton Hand-Seals: N/A Speed of Technique: 6x Kunai Chakra Consumption: Medium Description: After channeling chakra around their head the user will attempt to headbutt their opponent thus creating an explosion. Though death is not certain, anyone taking a direct explosion to the head will likely be severely maimed and incapacitated. Because of the possibly debris flying around the user must close their eyes before impact or risk their eyes being damaged. Due to the close proximity of the head during the explosion the user will also perish when using this technique. Technique Name: [Bakuton: Kanon Bo-ru] | [Explosion Release: Canon Ball] Technique Prerequisites: -- Rank: A Type: Ninjutsu, Taijutsu, Kekkei Genkai Elemental Nature: Bakuton Hand-Seals: N/A Speed of Technique: 6x Kunai Chakra Consumption: Large Description: A two-pronged attack utilized by those with the Bakuton Kekkei Genkai. First, the user will channel chakra to their feet to help propel them from a high surface and high into the air. Next they will channel explosive chakra to their backside and bring in their extremities in the form of a ball before falling back to earth. Upon impact, a sizable explosion will take place around an area of roughly 25 meters. Technique Name: [Bakuton: Poppu] | [Explosion Release: Pop] Technique Prerequisites: -- Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Elemental Nature: Bakuton Hand-Seals: -- Speed of Technique: 5x Kunai Chakra Consumption: Low Description: A supplementary technique utilizing the explosive nature of Bakuton chakra. By channeling tiny amounts of chakra to the foot and detonating them at each step the user can amplify their jumping ability and speed. Precise timing is required for the technique to work properly otherwise the user will throw themselves off balance. Technique Name: [Bakuton: Jikoku Kai] | [Explosion Release: Time Release] Technique Prerequisites: -- Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Elemental Nature: Bakuton Hand-Seals: -- Speed of Technique: 4x Kunai Chakra Consumption: Low - Medium Description: A technique used mostly for traps, the user will channel explosive chakra to an object that will detonate only after a specified amount of time has elapsed. The time depends on the amount of chakra stored, with larger objects only being able to go 3 minutes at max [3 posts] before exploding. Anything smaller than a fuma shuriken will be able to last 5 minutes [5 posts] at max before exploding.The applications for such a technique are nearly limitless assuming they adhere to the size requirements. Those with large reserves of chakra and high chakra control could possibly coat a small building, though the usual use is for weapons, trees, and doors.
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Post by Me on Sept 18, 2013 23:00:59 GMT -5
Fix the Coding of the Names. It's wrong.
To clarify, anything within the Type is automatically assumed you must have equal skill of said technique in rank to perform, as such, your first technique which is classified as Taijutsu, Ninjutsu, and Kekkei Genkai would require B-Rank skill in all three of those areas to perform, as such, you do not need to add those prerequisites.
The radius and force is dependent on how much chakra is sent to the feet, eh? Well, i suggest you modify the Chakra Consumption to Low, Medium, Large or Immense, with adequate description of force and distance for each chakra consumption. The next sentence after that one, a direct hit to the limb, you can remove that, as it's kind of self-explanatory if the person doesn't have adequate endurance to defend against an attack, and depending on the power, it can vary. Also, the recoil for this would be intense, unlike fist where the stance and angle disallow intense recoil, this one is a kick, which would cause an intense amount of recoil cause i can't see any angle or you keeping your footing with one foot to stop you from flying in the other direction.
Headbutt would most definitely be a suicide attack. The concussive force and recoil would immediately kill you.
I don't even know what to make of the canon ball, using your entire body as a medium for an explosion would definitely kill you imo.
Pop, would be one of those temporary unconventional stat increases, albeit i'm not entire sure. I'll let the secondary staff decide, also don't believe it would be a Taijutsu.
Time Release would need post counts. It also does not need the Taijutsu classification type. It has no dealing with the body, and is purely ninjutsu & kekkei genkai.
I have a question: Is speed of technique to speed at which the explosion expands?
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Post by kata2 on Sept 18, 2013 23:37:34 GMT -5
Made the necessary edits, added radius and effects for the Kick as well as recoil.
Added in a part about the Headbutt being a suicide technique.
Added in post counts for Time Release.
Canon Ball... um, any way you (or any other staff) could see that working with tweaks? If not I can remove it.
For the speed I at first had that as the speed at which they punched, kicked, jumped, etc. but realized that would fall under the Tai category so yes, now it is to determine the speed of the explosions expansion.
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Post by Me on Sept 19, 2013 16:07:53 GMT -5
The coding seems to now be mixed up in a lot of areas now. Try to just quote the original and copy and paste it numerous times below each other with double space, don't delete any of the block quote coding and add in the details of what's there now into the new templates. I'm sure that should fix the problem.
Kick, you can put the difference in consumption in the description. It looks absolutely nasty the way it is. Also, 7.5x Speed is Excessive. The max for any of these techniques would be 6x, so adjust accordingly.
This includes your canon ball technique.
Time Release, you say Shuriken to Fuma Shuriken is 5, then Fuma Shuirken and Larger is 3. That doesn't make sense. That would mean Fuma Shuriken sized objected have no difference. Just put Larger Objects for the second one. Also, put that in the description, not the Chakra Consumption.
Pop, i believe this will be a C-Rank, perhaps even B-Rank if the Stat Increase is added by a secondary staff, but even so, anything that would increase your speed or strength is an automatic C-Rank. To take note of any counterarguments, Shunshin no Jutsu, which is a D-Rank, doesn't increase speed, but causes the body to be capable of going to peak movement immediately without having to get a running momentum start.
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Post by kata2 on Sept 20, 2013 1:13:51 GMT -5
Made the edits, and I think I fixed the coding problem (stray justify tag and extra spaces).
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Post by Me on Sept 20, 2013 1:31:23 GMT -5
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Post by dex on Sept 21, 2013 7:49:05 GMT -5
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