SENJU JŌHEKIMA
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Post by SENJU JŌHEKIMA on Sept 24, 2013 14:59:43 GMT -5
Technique Name: Mokuton: Henge | Wood Release: Transformation Technique's Label: Universal Technique Prerequisites: Wood Release Kekkei Genkai Rank: D Type: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Elemental Nature: Mokuton Hand-Seals: Bird → Dog → Snake Speed of Technique: -- Chakra Consumption: Low Description: A variation on the basic Transformation Technique enhanced by the use of Wood Release. Rather than transforming his own body, the user summons an appropriate amount of wood from the earth and wraps it around himself, employing chakra to alter its form, color, and texture as needed. The end result is more akin to a costume than anything else, as the user is hidden inside of the form he has created. This offers him an added layer of protection against attack and makes maintaining the transformation easier than it would otherwise be, but the wood used for this technique is not exceptionally thick and can be splintered or shattered by most average shinobi.
[/blockquote][/blockquote] Technique Name: Moku Bunshin no Jutsu | Wood Clone Technique Technique's Label: Universal Technique Prerequisites: Wood Release Kekkei Genkai Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Elemental Nature: Mokuton Hand-Seals: Tiger → Dog → Snake Speed of Technique: -- Chakra Consumption: Medium + 1% [per clone] Description: A variation on the basic Clone Technique enhanced by the use of Wood Release. The user of this technique can summon as many as five Wood Clones from the ground or produce them from his own body. Ranging from simple dummies to fully-formed copies of the user, these clones are more versatile than any other; they do not disperse on impact and can take a fair amount of damage before reverting to their natural wood state. A fully-formed clone is able to perform any technique possessed by its source. It is able to merge with natural terrain for the purposes of concealment or high-speed transportation.
Wood Clones maintain a link with their source that enables the user to receive information from them remotely, though it is also possible to directly absorb any knowledge and memories a clone has obtained through direct physical contact. Physical contact also allows the user to transform the clones into seeds. These seeds respond only to the user's chakra and can thus be used to track individuals carrying them over long-distances. Conversely, their miniscule chakra signature makes it exceedingly difficult to detect the seeds themselves.
Creation of fully-formed Wood Clones comes at a Medium chakra consumption per clone plus an additional portion, the amount at the user's discretion, transferred to each clone. This portion must be at least 1%. Wood Clones have the stats of the user with a penalty of -2 Shunshin and -1 Taijutsu[Endurance]. Dummy clones are produce at Low cost with no additional chakra requirement, but are incapable of any kind of independent movement.
[/blockquote][/blockquote] Technique Name: Mokuton: Sashiki no Jutsu | Wood Release: Cutting Technique Technique's Label: Universal Technique Prerequisites: Wood Release Kekkei Genkai Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Elemental Nature: Mokuton Hand-Seals: Ram Speed of Technique: 4x Kunai (if launched) Chakra Consumption: Low Description: This technique, fairly simple in its execution, involves producing sharp fragments of wood from either the user's body or the earth itself. These fragments are as sharp as any blade and more durable than steel, making them effective as melee weapons. The true power of this technique, however, is its application as a projectile: the user can launch these fragments at enemies rather than producing them for melee use. If launched, the user is able to instigate further growth by forming the Ram seal, slowly weaving wood through the victim's body and potentially killing them should he strike vital organs before the wood is removed.
[/blockquote][/blockquote] Technique Name: Mokuton: Mokujōheki | Wood Release: Wood Locking Wall Technique's Label: Universal Technique Prerequisites: Wood Release Kekkei Genkai Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Elemental Nature: Mokuton Hand-Seals: Rat → Dog → Tiger Speed of Technique: 4x Kunai Chakra Consumption: Medium - Large Description: After forming the needed hand seals, the user summons a number of symmetrical wooden pillars from the earth. These pillars bend and interlock to form a half-dome or a full dome depending on the user's will. The extreme durability of the wood and the quickness with which it is summoned makes this technique very effective for defending against most projectiles, but the user can also use it offensively by attempting to crush a target between the interlocking pillars. It is also possible to use this technique to protect an ally or trap an enemy by making them the center of the technique instead of the user.
[/blockquote][/blockquote] Technique Name: Mokuton: Shichūrō no Jutsu | Wood Release: Four Pillar Prison Technique Technique's Label: Personal Technique Prerequisites: Wood Release Kekkei Genkai Rank: C Type: Ninjutsu, Kekkei Genkai Elemental Nature: Mokuton Hand-Seals: Ram → Ox → Boar → Snake Speed of Technique: -- Chakra Consumption: Low - Large Description: This technique summons a cage of variable size from the earth to imprison whomever the user pleases. The cage can be modified to include additional restraints (i.e. stocks, chains, and wooden shackles), but because it emerges from the ground fairly slowly, it is generally implausible to attempt to form the cage around a target directly. It is thus more prudent for the user to restrain the target beforehand, force the target into the cage, or manipulate its interior restraints in an effort to pull the target in.
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Post by Me on Sept 24, 2013 16:04:23 GMT -5
Mokuton! Yay.
[1st Tech] | Seems Decent.
[2nd Tech] | Bunshin Law.
Upon usage, Bunshinjutsu have a low chakra consumption per clone plus an additional portion, the amount at the user's discretion, transferred to each clone. This portion must be at least 1%. All clones have the stats of the user with a penalty of -2 Shunshin and -3 Taijutsu[Endurance].
That's the code needed to be put in.
Chakra Consumption should be: Low + X% per clone.
However, since Wood Clone is a remarkable subject for the clone rule and has more substantial versatility than the ordinary clone, i'll say they lose -1 Endurance instead of -3, but also require a Medium + X% per clone. Unless it's simply for a regular dummy creation, which should require only a low percentage. You can add that somewhere in the description.
[3rd Tech] | Lower the speed, perhaps to 4x Kunai as it is a C-Rank. I also don't like it being an auto-skewer from the inside, so when it tries to grow rapidly inside a person, it's a slow and antagonizing process so people can escape but not come out undamaged. I don't care if it expands at such a speed when not in a solid area, but when it is, it should be slowed down considerably. Perhaps the BS that the flesh and bone makes it harder to move through? Whatever explanation you come up with for its nerfing is fine. You don't even need one really.
[4th Tech] | As it can be used offensive, it needs a definitive speed of erection, this will also effect if you can properly erect the barrier in time to block an attack. This will also determine whether it deserves a rank up or not for its versatility and strength.
[5th Tech] | Seems Decent.
[Overall] | They should all be Universal, as anyone with Mokuton DNA can use them.
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SENJU JŌHEKIMA
Leaf Ninja
Jōhekima of the Forest [M:16880:0:]
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Post by SENJU JŌHEKIMA on Sept 24, 2013 20:19:03 GMT -5
[1st Tech] | Thank you kindly =) .
[2nd Tech] | I think I've fixed this, but I'll need an explanation (in the c-box will do): how does this work, exactly? Like, the clones themselves cost Medium + 1% (or more) chakra each, and then that's it? Or is there some sort of constant cost?
[3rd Tech] | Ya know what? Thank you. No solid IC reason for the reduction, but it's needed for balance. I get that. You have no idea how long it took me to get that out of people...elsewhere <_< . Fixed.
[4th Tech] | Heh heh. Speed of erection...
Done ;) .
[5th Tech] | Thanks again.
[Overall] | Done
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Post by Me on Sept 24, 2013 23:36:07 GMT -5
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