Blood Crest Seals 2| Personal | FIN

[Ren Homma "Nazo"]

血稜封: 陥穽爆弾
Chi ryō fū: Kansei Bakudan
Blood Crest Seal: Trap Bomb

Technique Name:

Chi ryō fū: Kansei | Blood Crest Seal: Trap

Technique's Label: personal
Technique Prerequisites:

-Blood must first be pre-stored using Chi kakunō yōki and Chi no shūkaku
-B-rank Medical Ninjutsu

Rank: C
Type: Fuinjutsu
Elemental Nature: none
Hand-Seals: 5
Speed of Technique: n/a
Chakra Consumption: large
Description:

By using blood pre-stored in a container, Nazo is capable of writing a blood crest seal very similar in design to the ones he uses to seal objects, however a small modification is made to the seal that allows it to react to chakra applied to a sister detonator seal.

• When this Kanji is written in the runic circle, the seal is then set to act as an explosive device.
  
• x2 Trap Seals per x1 Detonator Seal
  
• x2 Explosive Tag per x1 Trap Seal
  
• Must be written on a flat surface like a wall, floor, or ceiling

Can be made on the spot, however requires a lot of dexterity and precision to do so. The sister detonator seal must be identical in design except with the detonator factor added to it.

Sister detonator seal must be within a fifty foot radius of any one of the trap seals.

Cannot be detonated in the same post that it is drawn. Only one seal per post may be drawn.

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血稜封: 陥穽花穂
Chi ryō fū: Kansei Kasui
Blood Crest Seal: Trap Spike

Technique Name:

Chi ryō fū: Kansei Kasui | Blood Crest Seal: Trap Spike

Technique's Label: personal
Technique Prerequisites:

-Blood must first be pre-stored using Chi kakunō yōki and Chi no shūkaku
-B-rank Medical Ninjutsu

Rank: C
Type: Fuinjutsu
Elemental Nature: none
Hand-Seals: 5
Speed of Technique: Generation Speed x3 Kunai
Chakra Consumption: Low per Spike Generated
Description:

By using blood pre-stored in a container, Nazo is capable of writing a blood crest seal very similar in design to the ones he uses to seal objects, however a small modification is made to the seal that allows it to react to chakra applied to a sister detonator seal.

• the seal will act as a spike trap when activated. Multiple crimson spikes will spontaneously spawn from the seal mark and impale anything directly in front of it.
  
• 10 foot reach
  
• 1 ft. width at base, 1 in. width at tip
  
• x1 Trap Seal per x1 Detonator Seal
  
• Must be set on a flat surface
  
• best used in small cooridors
  
• Spike Strength B-Rank
  
• Spike Endurance C-Rank

Can be made on the spot, however requires a lot of dexterity and precision to do so. The sister detonator seal must be identical in design except with the detonator factor added to it.

Sister detonator seal must be within a fifty foot radius of any one of the trap seals.

Cannot be detonated in the same post that it is drawn. Only one seal per post may be drawn.

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血稜封: 陥穽煙
Chi ryō fū: Kansei Kemuri
Blood Crest Seal: Trap Smoke

Technique Name:

Chi ryō fū: Kansei Kemuri | Blood Crest Seal: Trap Smoke

Technique's Label: personal
Technique Prerequisites:

-Blood must first be pre-stored using Chi kakunō yōki and Chi no shūkaku
-B-rank Medical Ninjutsu

Rank: C
Type: Fuinjutsu
Elemental Nature: none
Hand-Seals: 5
Speed of Technique: n/a
Chakra Consumption: medium
Description:

By using blood pre-stored in a container, Nazo is capable of writing a blood crest seal very similar in design to the ones he uses to seal objects, however a small modification is made to the seal that allows it to react to chakra applied to a sister detonator seal.

• the seal will explode non-violently producing a cloud of crimson smoke that will fill up a small corridor in moments.
  
• acts like normal smoke and is affected by wind
  
• extends to about a 10 foot radius
  
• causes irritation of the eyes
  
• must be set on a flat surface, wall, floor, ceiling, ect...
  
• x3 Trap Seal per x1 Detonator Seal

Can be made on the spot, however requires a lot of dexterity and precision to do so. The sister detonator seal must be identical in design except with the detonator factor added to it.

Sister detonator seal must be within a fifty foot radius of any one of the trap seals.

Cannot be detonated in the same post that it is drawn. Only one seal per post may be drawn.

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血稜封: 陥穽油
Chi ryō fū: Kansei Abura
Blood Crest Seal: Trap Oil

Technique Name:

Chi ryō fū: Kansei Abura | Blood Crest Seal: Trap Oil

Technique's Label: personal
Technique Prerequisites:

-Blood must first be pre-stored using Chi kakunō yōki and Chi no shūkaku
-B-rank Medical Ninjutsu

Rank: C
Type: Fuinjutsu
Elemental Nature: none
Hand-Seals: 5
Speed of Technique: n/a
Chakra Consumption: medium
Description:

By using blood pre-stored in a container, Nazo is capable of writing a blood crest seal very similar in design to the ones he uses to seal objects, however a small modification is made to the seal that allows it to react to chakra applied to a sister detonator seal.

• when activated this seal generates a large puddle of crimson liquid that acts similar to oil
  
• will cause those that run over it to slip and fall
  
• generation radius of about 10 feet
  
• walking on water tech, will prevent those walking across from slipping
  
• x1 Trap Seal per x1 Detonator Seal

Can be made on the spot, however requires a lot of dexterity and precision to do so. The sister detonator seal must be identical in design except with the detonator factor added to it.

Sister detonator seal must be within a fifty foot radius of any one of the trap seals.

Cannot be detonated in the same post that it is drawn. Only one seal per post may be drawn.

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血稜封: 陥穽崩壊
Chi ryō fū: Kansei Hōkai
Blood Crest Seal: Trap Collapse

Technique Name:

Chi ryō fū: Kansei | Blood Crest Seal: Trap

Technique's Label: personal
Technique Prerequisites:

-Blood must first be pre-stored using Chi kakunō yōki and Chi no shūkaku
-B-rank Medical Ninjutsu

Rank: C
Type: Fuinjutsu
Elemental Nature: none
Hand-Seals: 5
Speed of Technique: n/a
Chakra Consumption: medium
Description:

By using blood pre-stored in a container, Nazo is capable of writing a blood crest seal very similar in design to the ones he uses to seal objects, however a small modification is made to the seal that allows it to react to chakra applied to a sister detonator seal.

• when activated it will cause a structure immediately around it to collapse inward
  
• may cause cave ins or even pit fall traps if placed well
  
• must be placed on flat surfaces like the ceiling or floor
  
• collapse radius of 5 ft
  
• x2 Trap Seal per x1 Detonator Seal

Can be made on the spot, however requires a lot of dexterity and precision to do so. The sister detonator seal must be identical in design except with the detonator factor added to it.

Sister detonator seal must be within a fifty foot radius of any one of the trap seals.

Cannot be detonated in the same post that it is drawn. Only one seal per post may be drawn.

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血稜封: 陥穽雷管
Chi ryō fū: Kansei Raikan
Blood Crest Seal: Trap Detonator

Technique Name:

Chi ryō fū: Kansei Raikan | Blood Crest Seal: Trap Detonator

Technique's Label: personal
Technique Prerequisites:

-Blood must first be pre-stored using Chi kakunō yōki and Chi no shūkaku
-B-rank Medical Ninjutsu

Rank: C
Type: Fuinjutsu
Elemental Nature: none
Hand-Seals: 5
Speed of Technique: n/a
Chakra Consumption: trap seal used + low consumption
Description:

This blood crest seal is the sister seal that activates the various affects of the Trap Seal. It is written identical to the trap seal however with a slight modification in the runes involved to turn it into a detonator seal instead. If this seal is compromised all of the corresponding trap seals with subsequently vanish. If a trap seal is compromised, all connected seals will be rendered null.

This seal is identifiable by the four cardinal directional diamonds connected to it.

This seal may be created before or after the sister trap seal.

Only one of these seals may be made to activate a trap seal set, any duplicates will not work, but may serve as a diversion.

Blood used in making this seal must be identical to that used in the trap seals.

Cannot be made in same post as traps seals. Cannot be activated in the same post as it is made.

Chakra Consumption works as the following:
Trap Seal Type x# + low consumption

an example is
Bomb Seal x2 + Detonator Seal
Large Consumption x2 + Low Consumption = Total Chakra expended

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[unbeing]

You gotta make things clearer here. Like for example hyperlinking those two techniques in the prereqs, as well as "the ones he uses to seal objects" because otherwise people will just be lost when they read this. As for the sister seal bit, specify that it's a Detonation Seal that is required for the Trap's effect(s) to take place. The mention of an unspecified "sister" seal confuses.

The Trap seal bothers me. It's a technique with several different effects, and that's unacceptable. I'd separate each effect into individual C-Rank seals. The Detonator seal is good as it is.

Bakudan Bomb: Why would all similar seals cease working if one is compromised? Is each Bakudan seal connected through the fuuinjutsu runes? Add a Medium Consumption per x1 Explosive Tag force.

Kasui Spike: How thick are the spikes at base level? Add a Low Consumption per spike generated.

Kemuri Smoke: This one also mentions the prevention of "sister" seals working if one is compromised; again, what does this refer to? Add a Low Consumption per Kemuri Smoke seal detonated. Should edit that it causes watering of the eyes, to causing irritation of the eyes.

Abura Oil: Add a Low Consumption per Abura Oil seal detonated.

Houkai Collapse: Add a Low Consumption per Houkai Collapse seal detonated.

PS: Don't simply answer any questions I made, make the corresponding edits.

And add a note to the Detonator seal that an additional Consumption applies corresponding with the Trap being detonated.

[Ren Homma "Nazo"]

I made the edits, however I set the Bomb seal as a definite x2 Explosive Tag force with a Large consumption upon detonation and a limit of 2 per detonator seal. Hopefully this will be a reasonable limitation for it.

All of the other corresponding edits have been made and the bit about the destruction of the sister seals has been removed, excluding the overall effect of the detonator seal's destruction.

[unbeing]

You missed the hyperlinks and separating each Trap into separate seals (as in techniques). And the Consumption of Kasui Spike is supposed to be for each spike generated, not per Kasui Spike seal.

I suppose the x2 Explosive Tag is acceptable if it's a Large Consumption.

[Ren Homma "Nazo"]

FIXED

[unbeing]

Hm... Seems fine. Apologies for the wait.

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