Kurogake jutsu | clan jutsu | FIN

[ryu]

Technique Name:

[Doton: Tsuchi no koe] | [Earth style: Earth's voice]

Technique's Label: clan
Technique Prerequisites:
Rank: D
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: Dōton
Hand-Seals: Mi(snake) -> Tatsu(dragon) -> Hitsuji(ram)
Chakra Consumption: Low - constant (until the jutsu is dispelled)
Description:

A sensory type ninjutsu passed down for generations in the Kurogke clan. It was originally meant for the workers to find their way in case they got lost in underground tunnels or caves. The way it works is simple - after activating this jutsu, the user is able to sense the vibrations of their surroundings. The limit of the distance this jutsu can cover is a maximum of 50 meters and only works on ground. If the ground is solid or not doesn't matter as much for the jutsu lets the user sense what is under the soil as well as above it. Also, the jutsu works when the user's eyes are closed, for optical vision cancels out the visual model the brain creates, thus rendering the jutsu useless as a sensor and the user only more aware of vibrations which can easily confuse them. Also, the jutsu allows the user to see what is connected to the ground in anyway. For example, by standing next to a lake, they could see what's at the bottom. However, if there was something hovering in mid air, they wouldn't be able to sense it,(unless it was giving off some sort of a vibration to the ground like flapping wings, heat, etc)

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Technique Name:

[Doton: Ashinami no kyojin] | [Earth style: Giant's step]

Technique's Label: clan
Technique Prerequisites: n/a
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: Douton
Hand-Seals: U(Hare) - Inu(dog) - Mi(snake)
Chakra Consumption: Low
Description:

A jutsu that sends a shockwave in massive structures of earth, causing them to tumble easily. This jutsu has no offensive power per say, it is just a way the Kurogake cleared sides of cliffs for a smoother surface. there is no mastery, just a strong shock to the structure of an obstacle. Of course, if something were below the structure, casualties might occur. A great way to distract someone, since the jutsu can be massive, yet slow.

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Technique Name:

[Douton: Bunshin] | [Earth style: Clone]

Technique's Label: clan
Technique Prerequisites: membership of Kurogake clan
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: Douton
Hand-Seals: One seal - Ushi(ox)
Chakra Consumption: Low + X% per clone
Description:

Clones made of mud. Simple as that. The maximum is 5 and upon destruction - they return back to their sticky mud form, which is why one might stick to them or get slowed down upon physical contact.
Upon usage, Bunshinjutsu have a low chakra consumption per clone plus an additional portion, the amount at the user's discretion, transferred to each clone. This portion must be at least 1%. All clones have the stats of the user with a penalty of -2 Shunshin and -3 Taijutsu[Endurance].

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Technique Name:

[Doton: Kasui kusari] | [Earth style: Spike chain]

Technique's Label: clan
Technique Prerequisites: membership of Kurogake clan
Rank: C
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: Doton
Hand-Seals: Tori(bird) - Mi(snake) - Tatsu(dragon) - Mi(snake) - Uma(horse) - Tora(tiger) - Ne(rat)
Speed of Technique: kunai x5 (the raising of spikes)
Chakra Consumption: medium
Description:

This technique needs the user to stand on ground, not water, a tree, wire or anything of the sort.
After activating, spikes start shooting out from the ground from around the user, continuing in such a matter until they cover a 15 meter radius from the user. After 5 seconds they do not disappear, just linger until destroyed or fall flat if the jutsu has been performed in sand . Each spike is about 30 centimeters wide and 60 centimeters tall. So, if someone were to get caught in the jutsu, they would be stabbed by at least two to three. The spikes do have little gaps between them so after the surprise, one can freely walk through them. Usually, this jutsu was used to fend off wild animals while working in the mountains.

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Technique Name:

[Douton: kanraku kon] | [Earth style: sinking soul]

Technique's Label: clan
Technique Prerequisites: membership of the Kurogake clan
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: Doton
Hand-Seals: Inu(dog) - U(hare) - I(boar) - Saru(monkey) - Mi(snake)
Chakra Consumption: medium to large (+ constant in some cases)
Description:

Quicksand like no other. The user transforms an area into quicksand. Be it ground level, the depth would vary from five to thirty meters (the more chakra needed after a limit of 6 meters). The same goes for radius of the area - the limit being fifteen to forty meters (more chakra used after 16 meters). The sinking speed gets slower the bigger the area, the fastest being kunai x6 and the slowest being kunai x1.5 (all this is without struggling from the target). The user must stay in one place all the time or the jutsu will halt midways, leaving the targets partially sunken. The quicksand is full of the user's chakra so it is harder to get out from it and struggling will still make the targets sink since the quicksand area has already been created. Staying focused on accelerated sinking costs +15% the jutsu cost.

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Technique Name:

[Dōton: tsuchi joui] | [Earth style: earth coat]

Technique's Label: clan
Technique Prerequisites: B-rank, 4 doton ninjutsu, membership of the Kurogake clan
Rank: B
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: doton
Hand-Seals: used as a reactionary ninjutsu. No handseals.
Chakra Consumption: low to medium
Description:

Upon getting ready to encounter a hit, the user can coat themselves in a thick layer of rock. While not especially durable against lightning based attacks, the armor solidifies around the caster's entire body (medium cost) or just a specific area (a limb or stomach. low cost). This slows down the caster before shed, however, the caster can bodyswitch out of it when needed. It holds until switched out of or destroyed from the outside.

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Technique Name:

[Dōton: rokujou no Kuromaru] | [Earth style: Kuromaru's anger]

Technique's Label: clan
Technique Prerequisites: A-rank Ninjutsu
Rank: A
Type: Ninjutsu
Elemental Nature: Doton
Hand-Seals: Tori(bird) - Ushi(ox) - Mi(snake) - Tatsu(dragon) - Ne(rat) - Mi(snake) - Saru(monkey) - Uma(horse) - Tora(tiger) - Mi(snake) - Hitsuji(ram)
Chakra Consumption: Large
Description:

This jutsu allows the user to lift the sides of a larger area of ground, bordering from 30 to 50 meters in both width and length (so it will not exceed 80 square meters), split it in the middle and bring both sides together in a folding motion, therefore crushing everything in between. This jutsu can turn to be devastating because after completion, there is no telling where the rubble will fall since that can not be controlled.

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[Kai]

[Doton: Tsuchi no koe] | [Earth style: Earth's voice]
Add C-Rank Sensory Perception as a Prerequisites. You can remove 'membership of Kurogake clan' since this is understood from the tech label. Also, what are you referring to by Kunai x3? The speed at which this covers distance? Or the speed at which this technique is executed?

[Doton: Ashinami no kyojin] | [Earth style: Giant's step]
Bump the rank up to C. Please remember that Tech speed is required only for projectiles and, as of such you can remove the section from this tech.

[Douton: Bunshin] | [Earth style: Clone]
Still don't get the tech speed bit.

[Doton: Kasui kusari] | [Earth style: Spike chain]
Aight, seems fine.

[Douton: kanraku kon] | [Earth style: sinking soul]
A similar technique already exists - Click [Doton: Hayaisuna | Earth Release: Quicksand]

[Dōton: tsuchi joui] | [Earth style: earth coat]
A similar technique already exists - Click [Doton: Domu | Earth Release: Earth Spear]

[Dōton: rokujou no Kuromaru] | [Earth style: Kuromaru's anger]
Your prerequisites make no sense. I don't see how '6 doton' techs has any relation to this technique. If you want to show the level of prowess required to execute this technique, you can add perhaps A-Rank Ninjutsu. Which comes to the second bit, A-Rank what? Overall Rank wouldn't make sense since a shinobi's individual skill ranks are counted here. Once again, Tech speed and 'membership of Kurogake' isn't required and can be removed .

[ryu]

Edited stuff. :)
Sorry, I couldn't find the part about speed being only for projectiles so... I winged it >.>;

About the first one - it is not a sensory type jutsu so I don't think it is needed, because the jutsu has nothing whatsoever to do with sensing stuff witch chakra around. It is a doton ninjutsu that focuses on vibrations. think of it as ultrasound in terms of locating things, only guiding from the slight shockwaves and above ground. Erm... like Toph in avatar xD

Also, I know that those two are similar to the jutsu here in a way, but not exactly. The specifics are very different, so if it is not much trouble, I'd like to keep these here... if I can...

[unbeing]

First of all, apologies for the wait. Wow.

Second, fix the Doton spelling. It's simply "Doton" with a regular "o", no strange symbols or anything.

Earth's Voice Based on the canon thing used by Tobirama. Mm, remove this. No can do anything about this.

Giant's Step Hm. I like deez.

Clone Not exactly canon by our standards (as is anime-only), but from the show nonetheless. Remove.

Spike Chain Honey, there's at least one technique like this in the Record. Remove it.

Sinking Soul There's also one like this in the Record. And the canon Swamp of the Underworld, which isn't quicksand, but still a similar concept. Reeeeemove.

Earth Coat Hm. This one seems a bit generic too. Why should it be a clan technique? Also, what does the "B-rank, 4 doton ninjutsu" in Prerequisites mean?

Kuromaru's Anger Whoa. This would require, I don't know, A-Rank Taijutsu[Strength] at least. It's also obviously based on the canon Mausoleum Dumpling, and not enough is added/changed to make it more unique. I'm just not convinced that this should be a clan technique either. And you don't need to list A-Rank Ninjutsu as a Prerequisite; that's implied in the technique being A-Rank.