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Post by Tanzui Kuroda on Oct 24, 2013 15:29:57 GMT -5
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General Information TODAY'S THE BEST TIME TO GET UP! ► NicknamesOld Man Tanzui-sempai Kyousuke (Reverent Aid) ► GenderMale ► Age72 ► Home VillageKumogakure► Innate AffinityRaiton► Elemental ManipulationRaiton, Doton, Suiton► ClanTanzui-Clan► Clan PositionLeader - permission granted by Unbeing ► Military RankJōnin► Shinobi Position Jōnin Hanchō ► Individual Rank[DO NOT EDIT THIS, STAFF WILL DECIDE] E, D, C, B, A, or S.
Mental &Physical BEFORE MY EYES YOU STILL DON'T STOP! ► AppearanceEyes as grey as the clothing that he wears, his hair white as a dove's wing from old age. This is also the same color as his tool kit found at each thigh holding half the tools he carries in each one. He has pale skin, a familiar trait of the icy mountains he was born on though not the same as those of Kumogakure, and lightly colored lips to match the contrast of his very pale skin. Kuroda wears a uniformed clothing of a medieval time, one that he has multiple sets of although all of them look alike. Even though he possesses this outfit, he does wear a medallion with an engraving of a claymore draping around his neck. This outfit is a uniform in all rights with the colors of Navy Blue to shape it. Long sleeves with a simple design, there are golden chords along his body holding together the uniform itself. The lack of full body suit armor, even though he is a Tanzui, relays the formidable speed to which he was granted the title, “Reverent Aid.” Adding to this is the breastplate armor he wears that is completely light, not even real armor to wear. As this armor is merely an over piece that has no real defensive value to it. His shoulders also have plated armor bits that extend to the mid upper arm. All connectors have the same golden metal symbol while the cloth is purely navy in color, the not so same color as his white gloves and his combat black boots. Strands of this golden chord keep the gloves tapered to his wrists while he has grey and tan khaki pants, the same grey as his darkened and vacant eyes. Under the false armor is that navy uniform, this uniform is lightened at the elbows with coloring fade out. The same color fade goes down to a third of his thighs allowing little of his pant’s original color to show. There is a high collar top where the neck exposes itself out low to the portion of a second button being exposed. His headband with the black cloth drapes around his forehead, the very cloth itself in a singular exposure of which the aged headband since the start of the village was made. Never having to change his headband, save for the tattered cloth, he exposes himself as a kinder man with his eyes in such a manner. ► Mental AssessmentKuroda is a collected person who does not do something without calculating it. In his head, everything is a number or a derivative of something that can come from a formula. When he speaks, he speaks almost cryptically and uses a smaller vocabulary than most though filled with larger meaning behind such words and conjunctions that some do not ever understand from him. Kuroda is well versed in the history of the village hidden in the clouds: how it was forged and how it saves and takes lives. He does not hate anyone, he cannot due to his morals per say; rather, he dislikes something to the point of making it a negative number in her calculations. Though being seen as such, this calculation of negatives and positives, his personality derives itself of doing the right thing when no one is looking, making himself have high standards of integrity. With such a high standard, he is at a loss of finding the “perfect” one for himself while feeling an equivalent to envy to those who have. He possesses a strong will whereas the process to break himself down will take more than a few parlor tricks to make him crack. For others, no matter how wrong they may be, he will risk his neck to help and save them no matter what. Kuroda believes in his brawn like most Tanzui, his strength of arm to assist and perform well in the manners of which he would use his fist and even ninjutsu, the tools of his manner that has created his manner of ninja code. To protect those younger, to aid those weaker, and to keep his lessons close to heart. This is the only way he has lived so long with the regrets that could have torn him apart on the inside if he could not have the resilience or his life’s way. The life was his and even though he is collected, calculating, and unsocial he will always believe that integrity and belief trumps all wrong. Now finding one who is suited for him, that is a falsehood to him. He does believe he has lived too long, and even though he trusts in that will, he aims to begin a life to never allow fortitude of such a long time. Uses to this, he perfects his style of living to an even kinder form of what he could perform. ► likes- Taijutsu
- Women
- Strong will
- Accidents
- Spiders
► dislikes- Genjutsu
- Heat
- Discourteous individuals
- Ignorance
- Genin
► positives- Old Age
- Many Experiences
- Knowing every Raikage since Kumo's insurrection
- Self Sufficient
- Family Oriented
► negatives- Knows Ninjutsu
- Did not specialize himself in Taijutsu
- Went against family history
- Pervert
- Senile at times
► Background InformationKuroda was born for a mission, or so that was the original idea behind the birth of this one child of the Land of Clouds. He was born to a player named Kee Tsuki who had married/taken his bride Maryia from a family of physically adept individuals from the Tanzui Clan. Of course not all was as seemed, many differences between the two became similarities, as Maryia was a bearer of his daughter while also her family being a known profession of martial artists was similar to the way of life in accordance to Mr. Tsuki. Tsuki was the teacher of Defina, a missing individual from what would one day be Kumogakure, and he immediately could see a slight resemblance between his own Son and Defina.
Both being fare faced children and not only that but the fact that when seeing just the slight chance that a Tanzui could be a taijutsu expert like Defina made the father thoughtful. Therefore, in efforts of his lost student and himself, Maryia and Lee named the child Tanzui Kuroda. This child was reasonably an excellent martial artist in the family profession and other than that, he was also the leading producer of the paintings that his father’s side of the family were recognized well for, to which they exercised the child regularly. Children traditionally were the ones in the quarry when it came to the father’s family who worked to the bone until maturity yet his mother had Kuroda regularly train there by learning the many mentions of martial arts while doing such things independently.
However, in the months that followed his fifth birthday he entered into the studious learning of a swift foot style, a prodigy to be at the whim of the family’s head leaders. His father were optimistic for this boy and that much was not going to be dispersed in reality. Kuroda was put through an intense artful branding, a brand over his heart as he would be screaming through the entire night, a screaming babe first born it would seem yet the way this youthful boy screamed was frightening. Even with the sound dampeners around the building, this boy’s cries reached his own mother.
The father had restrained her until after, the father himself had already known what was going to happen and he was not going to let his wife get in the way of it. Always saying, “Our boy was born with a purpose, do not interfere.” Such menacing words were said repetitively through that night and eventually the boy returned after a month of healing. His heart was placed equal to that of a brand, a brand that signified him being a tool to the family while also his brand was that of his mother’s clan symbol. Going through the training had been a challenge when learning such things as speed of fist and foot, the expenditure of his muscles hurting that brand.
It is because of this that he learned taijutsu though, a choice of which his father had planned inevitable to him. Such a brand he learned from his father and from there he would continue to learn more, gain more knowledge as he would eventually become a growing age that soon events came forth that the world was ever changing. This ever-changing world happened to be when he turned twenty-six in his very aging life style. He has had three children all dead of the same branding he received at his youthful age while his evident late twenties as it would seem.
He had begun serving a woman some time before, a service that happened to be from one warring individual family to another. His service to this woman, to Otohime, happened to pay off in the endeavors that would ensue and occur. His skills at their max from the time, he happened to ease into life with a calm sense. It was quite unusual while in this formula, he happened to ease himself into learning and there in easing himself into a service to this woman who happened to appear to be so much stronger than him. For two whole years, he served her, served her while she would go into a direction something far different than normal.
1 SHJ - 28 When Kumogakure was made, he followed after Otohime, serving her even when she was the Raikage, his service under her a quite comical yet interesting way of life. Such a way of life, that proceed all the more useful to his meaning as a single and most useful pawn in the fights to come. He truthfully and potentially aimed to being one of the many shinobi that proved their worth and at this time. He proved his by being one of the most trusted AnBu individuals of this grouping. This way of life, this singular and most interesting form of knowledge came forth as one would learn that he soon became far stronger than other shinobi while at the same instance he educated himself to learning the ways of the shinobi through ninjutsu training as well.
8 SHJ - 36 As a trusted adviser and friend to the Raikage, Kuroda goes and helps flourish and create the small village, his headband hidden for a good few years during this time. He was a teacher here, a trainer to the youthful shinobi growing in this time as he would help aim and improve the growing numbers of this clan to an even higher form. The group he soon found growing in this manner, this group educating themselves in forms he never seen before and soon the teacher was being taught and vice versa. However, as he was a fast learner, and disobeying direct orders of his clan that he also wound up becoming the leader for, he started to learn ninjutsu.
13 SHJ - 41 The village he helped raise, this village that would grow in economical growth and surplus would soon become what would be Amegakure. Kuroda growing in such forms as he would ascertain the situation and would from there plot its course to becoming ever higher in that decorated form. Kuroda still teaching younger and younger generations in all that he learned, his style of knowledge becoming, which which was known as a very unethical form of taijutsu merged with genjutsu too. The formulation of both happened to calm himself to such a form, this form that would prove ever aiding to a subtle configuration of knowledge and power all in one.
16 SHJ - 44 Kuroda happened to find himself in the middle of a war, the insurrecting fights caused by Ame educating itself to free itself from Kumo that Kuroda would happen to call him in tying up the loose ends. He obliges, killing some of his own and best students in cold blood to wretched heat. He would do this with a calm formulation of plans, treating every individual in Ame as a threat and even possibly a negative number in his forms of killing them all, alas when their aid from Konoha occurred, he would retreat back to Kumogakure without any disgruntlement to such things.
17 SHJ - 45 Kuroda assists the Raikage in the summit and even the plots made between them and the Mizukage while he is a third party in all of this. Becoming aged far higher than most anyone else in the war. He becomes the AnBu Captain at this point in time as he aids the war efforts and the Raikage at the same time. During the war, every pillaging attack he led, he would aim and surmount a justified means to hunt down a Tailed Beast for the Raikage having split up efforts in attacking forms of such a manner, while happening to enjoy leading the battles in this first ninja world war.
22 SHJ – 50 The first Raikage happened to fall after a many deaths and turmoil caused upon the destruction of Amegakure. Kuroda’s advanced troops retreated after many long years of battle, many dying however for him he survived. Survived even after having witnessed the destruction of Amegakure through the will of the many Tailed Beasts. She herself going and aiding the next Kumogakure Raikage. He would aid this one like he has aided the last Raikage and now every single Raikage after him as he advanced to becoming the Hanchou of Kumogakure. This aiding grace would become far higher and graceful to which Kuroda himself was a trusted adviser having survived this war and more wars to come.
39 SHJ – 67 The second Raikage takes a group of skilled warriors with Kuroda in tow as he aids them. However, soon the full effect of such a grief would bring out the death of a great many threats that ensue. Kuroda finds that the beast the group of them all track out, all face heavy casualties, Kuroda himself aiding in bringing the wounded Raikage back to the village. Kuroda finds that such a things as that mortal wound inflicted by their attack on the nine tails happened to have Kumo lose another fellow shinobi and more so, another fellow leader of Kumo to untimely death caused by a tailed beast.
43 SHJ – 71 Through word and folk lore, the Jounin Hanchou of Kumogakure persists that Sunagakure was the cause to the Raikage’s desperation of death and collapse. Kuroda pertains himself to holding up this lie, holding it to the truth he expresses while he would also maintain a knowledge and now leads war with a calm and calculated deadly focus on himself. A warmonger, he receives a great many nicknames in the battles he cause and even then do not cause yet all the same he is known for a great many things since his start in the battles held against the enemies of Kumogakure and the Raikage, serving this third Raikage to the best of his abilities in his aging days.
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[/justify] [/div] Special Abilities EVERYBODY HANDS UP! ► Special Traits ► Physical Old Age Having lived so long, he has sufficiently lowered his abilities to subject himself to a cramped old frame. However, he has learned to subjugate himself to retaining his olden reflexes to the highest degree. With age as it seemed, he still maintains a proper exposure to his calm selection.
Lightning God Practitioner Since he was young he has trained in martial arts in accordance to his mother's clan. As such, he ever so roughly trains more in these efforts as he begets and learns more with every passing day. As such, with a swift hand and foot he keeps learning and training under the guide of being a Lightning God Practitioner.
► Special Tanzui Leader Born as a Tanzui, a mother bearing marks of pure-blood while the father was that of a different breed of shinobi entirely. This soldier, was born having skills in both ninjutsu and taijutsu to the highest and most formal degrees. With this old age, he gave up specializing in taijutsu and went into Chakra Reserves with it, training effortlessly in it while exposing himself to more elements of manipulation training as well.
Jutsu List IT'S THE HIGHLY ANTICIPATED HERO'S COME BACK! ► Your Techniques
[--E--] Bunshin No Jutsu - Clone Technique Henge No Jutsu - Transformation Technique Kawarimi No Jutsu - Body Replacement Technique Nawanuke No Jutsu - Escape Technique Kakuremino No Jutsu - Cloak of Invisibility Technique
[--D--] Kanashibari no Jutsu | Temporary Paralysis Technique Oboro Bunshin no Jutsu | Haze Clone Technique Raiton: Shoudo | Lightning Release: Illumination Suiton: Mizugakure no Jutsu | Water Release: Hiding in Water Technique Doton: Shinjuu Zanshu no Jutsu | Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique Doton: Iwagakure no Jutsu | Earth Release: Hiding in Rock Technique Nokkuautochoppu | KO Chop
[--C--] Taiujo no Jutsu | Body Elimination Technique Taioo no Jutsu | Body Flame Technique Raiton: Shichuu Shibari | Lightning Release: Four Pillar Bind Raiton: Kinniku Dageki | Lightning Release: Muscle Shock Raiton: Hikari | Lightning Release: Light Raiton: Raiko Kosen | Lightning Release: Lightning Arch Mizu Bunshin no Jutsu | Water Clone Technique Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu | Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique Doton: Retsudo Tenshou | Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm Doton: Dochuu Eigyo no Jutsu | Earth Release: Underground Projection Fish Technique Doton: Dochuu Senkou | Earth Release: Subterranean Voyage Doton: Iwa Hashira Kangoku | Earth Release: Rock Pillar Prison Yama Hebi | Mountain Snake Kattakumo | Cloud Cutter Atsuryokuha | Pressure Wave Denkou Arashi | Lightning Storm
[--B--] Omoikanji | Mind Reading Raiton: Raijuu Hashiri no Jutsu | Lightning Release: Lightning Beast Running Technique Raiton: Hibana Hari | Lightning Release: Spark Needle Raiton: Raiko Yubisaki | Lightning Release: Lightning Fingertips Raiton: Jibashi | Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder Suiton: Suijinheki | Water Release: Water Encampment Wall Suiton: Suikoudan no Jutsu | Water Release: Water Shark Bullet Technique Sensatsu Suishou | Thousand Flying Water Needles of Death Suiton: Goshokuzame | Water Release: Five Feeding Sharks Suiton: Suiryuudan no Jutsu | Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique Tsunami | Tsunami Raikou Senkou | Lightning Flash Kaze ni Sakaratte Tsuyo | Power Against the Wind
[--A--] Ranjishigami no Jutsu | Wild Lion's Mane Technique Suiton: Daibakufu no Jutsu | Water Release: Great Waterfall Technique Uramiame | Grudge Rain Boruto Fureaa | Bolt Flare Ikazuchi Tataku | Thunder Clap
Inventory HOLD UP YOUR FINGERS AND COUNTDOWN! ► Weapons!- Kunai - 10
- Shuriken - 12
- Explosive Tag - 10
Skill Proficiency 3-2-1 ► Shinobi Traits E-Rank D-Rank C-Rank B-Rank A-Rank S-Rank ► Skill Chakra Reserves [+] ► Rank A-Rank► points 4 ► Upgrades -- ► Skill Chakra Control ► Rank A-Rank► points 4 ► Upgrades -- ► Skill Shunshin [Capped @ C] [Capped @ E] ► Rank E-Rank► points 0 ► Upgrades -- [/b][/color] Reaction Time → Rank C-Rank→ points [Base Stat] + 2 → Upgrades [X][/ul] ► Skill Ninjutsu ► Rank A-Rank► points 4 ► Upgrades -- [/b][/color] Elemental Usage → Rank S-Rank→ points [Base Stat] + 1 → Aspect Suiton → Rank A → Position 1st Art → Aspect Raiton → Rank B → Position 2nd Art → Aspect Doton → Rank C → Position 3rd Art → Aspect Bunshinjutsu → Rank D → Position 4th Art → Aspect Unused → Rank E → Position 5th Art [/ul] ► Skill Taijutsu ► Rank A-Rank► points 3 ► Upgrades [X]► Skill Genjutsu [Capped @ C] ► Rank C-Rank► points 2 ► Upgrades -- ► Sub-Skill Bukijutsu [Capped @ E] ► Rank E-Rank► points 0 ► Upgrades -- ► Sub-Skill Shurikenjutsu [Capped @ D] ► Rank D-Rank► points 0 ► Upgrades -- [/div] OOC Information MAKE SOME NOISE! Outside Info, Yo! ► Face Claim Code Geass | Charles zi Britannia | Tanzui Kuroda
► Chatango Name Jojokaguya
► Other Characters A list of them
► Special Position Claim N/A
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Post by Tanzui Kuroda on Nov 4, 2013 1:34:20 GMT -5
Alright, I kinda lost all muse for a samurai so I made a kumo instead, and a rather old one too. All in all, I think I did a good job with the switch over. FIN
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Post by Me on Nov 4, 2013 13:46:35 GMT -5
I will first and foremost quickly address your misunderstanding of the Age Stat Based Systems.
[1] - When you are of the age 70+ you receive 2 Extra Points[Which you have distributed correctly] in exchange for 2 Skills Capped @ C-Rank, either Chakra Control, Shunshin, or Taijutsu. You have Two Capped, Shunshin & Genjutsu, which i would take is from your Chakra Reserves Specialization. This means you still have 2 Caps needed to be placed.
[2] - It seems you misread the thread, you cap both "Bukijutsu & Shurikenjutsu" @ E & D Respectively. Which means, to remove the cap of one of your Age-Based Stats, you cap them both. You capped one. Also, even if you did cap both, you still need to cap 1 Core @ C-Rank[Chakra Control, Chakra Reserves, or Taijutsu] as Shunshin is already capped. Or, you can Cap Shunshin "again" - a Special Old Age Previ, and put Shunshin @ E-Rank.
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Post by Tanzui Kuroda on Nov 4, 2013 22:47:25 GMT -5
done
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Post by Tanzui Kuroda on Nov 10, 2013 22:40:32 GMT -5
6 days of waiting BUMP
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