Revamp

[Uchiha Ichiro]

Name of Shinobi: Uchiha Ichiro
Profile Link: Here
Chatango Name: Houshima
Reason for Modification: There were a couple issues I've noticed with the character and I think it'd be best if I revised the application completely.
Modification:
Copy/paste this as his revamped profile

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[/i], A name given to Ichiro by the elder Uchiha who have speculated his many talents. After having shown his mastery of the Grand Fireball Technique at the age of seven and unlocking his Sharingan at ten, the name "Crimson Fruit" of the Uchiha clan seemed to fit perfectly for the young shinobi. It symbolizes that he is the offspring of the 'true' Uchiha.[/ul][/blockquote][/justify]

► Gender

Male ^♂

► Age

Twelve ^[12]

► Home Village

Konohagakure ^{[木ノ葉隠れの里]}

► Clan

Uchiha Ichizoku ^{[うちは一族]}

► Innate Affinity

Katon ^[火遁]

► Elemental Manipulation

Katon ^[火遁]

► Military Rank

Genin ^[下忍]

► Position

Sanbuntai ^[サン]

► Individual Rank

D

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Mental &Physical
EVERYONE IS A VICTIM TO THAT ATTRACTION, YEAH!

► Appearance

Height: 5'2^½ft
Weight: 97lbs
Eye Color: ▐
Hair Color: ▐
Attire:

• Blue Long-Sleeve
  
• Brown Flak Jacket
  
• Dark Brown Pants
  
• Navy Shinobi Boots
  
• Black Fingerless Gloves
  
• Konoha Hia-te [Arm]
  
• Leather Sheathe [Back]
  
• Shinobi Hip Pouch [Waist]
  
• Kunai Holster [Thigh]
  
• Black Overcoat [Optional]
  

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Ichiro is a boy with a fairly tall and skinny body, perfectly built for speedy and agile maneuvers. Though skinny he is not without muscles, the result of years of intense training for his profession as a shinobi. With a physique like his, one which would cause even the Konoha elders to envy him, it is known that Ichiro has noble blood flowing in his veins. He is a member of noble Uchiha clan. Physically Ichiro's body is at tip-top shape, almost flawless for his body-frame and age. In other words it's a well toned physique befitting of a respectable shinobi. This shinobi's posture is perfect and gives him a noble air which is further cemented with every carefully measured step, every efficient motion, and every proud stance. The way he presents himself is found as a stunning quality. Standing tall and proud, head held high, shoulders back, and with a walk that commands your respect and your attention.

The Uchiha's face is very noble. He has a youthful face despite his somewhat mature attitude, and is considered quite the catch amongst the young Kunoichi of Konoha. One of the unique qualities of Ichiro's physical appearance that is said to entice a person (male or female), is his smile. Many describe it as a one of those rare smiles, one that holds a quality of eternal reassurance in it. It seems to face the whole external world for an instant, and then, concentrates itself on that very person with an irresistible prejudice in the favor of them. A smile that understood a person just so far as they wanted to be understood, believed in them as they would like to believe in themselves, and assured them that it had precisely the impression that they, at their best, hoped to express. Smile that is capable of making the girls swoon

► Mental Assessment

Ichiro has a cheerful demeanor, and is always on hand to offer support, encouragement and guidance to his friends. Ichiro has a complex personality; at times he is mischievous, laid-back, and friendly, but at other times he is cold and bitter. Despite his generally playful attitude, Ichiro can also be very mature. He often acts as a big brother and mentor to the people he is around, particularly people around his age. Ichiro is very intelligent and strategic when it comes to battling, working out tactics that would be most effective and is very knowledgable about facts and history.

Ichiro enjoys giving silly nicknames to various people and things. Ichiro also loves sleeping, and considers it to be one of his hobbies. He sleeps much longer than his peers, averaging 7 to 8 hours a night with a one-hour nap during the day; he also sleeps all day on his days off. Ichiro is quite a rebel at heart, he often expresses how he feels about most situations by either claiming that something is 'cool' or 'not cool.' Being a supposedly cool guy, he prefers to use the direct approach, which most of the time fails. He has a unique love for eating fruits, mainly apples, his father says it is because he was a Shinigami in the past life. He also seems to be a glutton towards food in general. He can sometimes become too driven by the thought of eating different flavors of food, which leads him to bicker with whomever he is with or become impatient with them; but despite his squabbles with some of his friends, he is always able to maintain a solid friendship among his companions.

One thing Ichiro has gained from all the years of being 'cool' is he is possibly one of the most loyal people one could possibly meet. He firmly believes that breaking promises and changing sides 'isn't cool at all.' Deep down, he is always looking out for his friends, and is even willing to sacrifice himself in order to protect the villagers of Konoha and his friends, showing his bravery and dedication. Ichiro proves to be actually quite determined, and he also helps people get back on their feet when they are at a loss.

► likes

• Combat
  
• History
  
• Laughing
  
• Challenges
  
• Helping
  

► dislikes

• Failure
  
• Dishonesty
  
• Greed
  
• Mockery
  
• Cruelty
  

► positives

• Strategic
  
• Fearless
  
• Resilient
  
• Independent
  
• Reliable
  

► negatives

• Annoying
  
• Whimsical
  
• Sarcastic
  
• Jokeful
  
• Daredevil
  

► Background Information

Ichiro, the one and only son of Uchiha Mazuna the man who murdered his own wife in order to acquire the Mangekyō Sharingan. Before that time period, Mazuna was a decent father. He instilled many of the Uchiha clan's deities onto the young lad and also taught him the fundamentals of ninjutsu. By the age of six, Ichiro had already learned the Grand Fireball Technique.

Ichiro's time in the academy was rough, despite exceeding in both his studies and training. What made it rough was the constant mockery and teasing he received from his clan mates who were all other than him by one to three years. Each of them had already acquired their blood inhertied doujutsu while Ichiro was only left with the Grand Fireball Technique to brag about.

Ichiro had longed for the day when he would be able to unlock his Sharingan and exceed his peers so he could be able to properly defend himself. How unfortunate was it that the day he awakened his clan's doujutsu was the same he watched his mother die right before his eyes.

A month or so before graduation, Mazuna was acting strange. On a day Ichiro was coming home from his training he heard arguing . The moment he opened the door to see what all the ruckus was about there he saw his father pressing a kunai at his mother's throat. Ichiro was so confused, before he could even reacted his father quickly decapitated his mother and shifted his attention onto his son. In that instant Ichiro saw eyes that he had never seen before and at the same time he saw the weird kaleidoscope doujutsu, his vision began to change. He was now able to see chakra.

The Sharingan was awakened

Mazuna grinned at his young son before making his escape. Anger flushed into the young Uchiha's heart as he had nothing left but a visual of a crime scene. He couldn't chase down his father or waste time calling for help. Instead, Ichiro sat by his bloody mother's side and watched as she died slowly. Before her eyes closed for good she muttered a few words to her beloved son "Live long my Crimson Fruit".

A month after that Ichiro graduated from the academy, nothing was ever the same since. He lived alone in an apartment away from the Uchiha compound. He received news that his father was killed by the head of the Uchiha clan in a monstrous battle. Apparently his body was decimated by a devastating jutsu used by the Uchiha hanchou and was unable to be recovered.

Little did anyone know - Ichiro included - that Mazuna was a lot stronger than what is believed.

Special Abilities
EVERYBODY HANDS UP!

► Special Traits

► Physical

[Sleight Of Hand] - A natural speciality of Ichiro's. His hand speed is phenomanal especially for his age and rank. He is able to perform handseals and launch projectiles at an impressive speed. Ichiro is subconscious of this ability and whenever it is mentioned he considers it to be 'normal'.

► Special

[One-Tomoe Sharingan]

[/color] - Ichiro is capable of seeing chakra flow. The Sharingan itself gives color to chakra, allowing Ichiro to differentiate them. He is also able to detect most low ranked genjutsu and if a person is under a genjutsu. His sharingan also grants him an incredible clarity of perception, being able to see an enemy's movements ahead of time.
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Jutsu List
IT'S THE HIGHLY ANTICIPATED HERO'S COME BACK!

► Your Techniques

S ^Rank

A ^Rank

B ^Rank

C ^Rank

Katon: Gōkakyū no Jutsu
[Fire Release: Great Fireball Technique]

D ^Rank

Garandō
[Emptiness]

Hakanaishu
[Momentary Spite]

Sōshuriken no Jutsu
[Manipulated Shuriken Technique]

E ^Rank

Henge no Jutsu
[Transformation Technique]

Bunshin no Jutsu
[Clone Technique]

Nawanuke no Jutsu
[Escape Technique]

Kawarimi no Jutsu
[Substitution Technique]

Kakuremino no Jutsu
[Cloak of Invisibility Technique]

Inventory
HOLD UP YOUR FINGERS AND COUNT DOWN!

► Weapons!

• Hip Pouch
  • |08| Kunai
    
  • |12| Shuriken
    
  • |10| Explosive Tag
  
  
  
• Thigh Holster
  • |30m| Ninja Wire
    
  • |02| Kunai
  
  
  
• Sheathe
  • |01| Wakizashi

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skill proficiency
3-2-1
► Shinobi Traits

► Skill Chakra Reserves
► Rank E
► Points 0
► Upgrades --

► Skill Chakra Control
► Rank C
► Points 2
► Upgrades --

► Skill Shunshin
► Rank D
► Points 1
► Upgrades --

► Skill Ninjutsu
► Rank C
► Points 2
► Upgrades

► Skill Taijutsu
► Rank E
► Points 0
► Upgrades --

► Skill Genjutsu
► Rank E
► points 0
► Upgrades --

► Skill Bukijutsu
► Rank E
► Points 0
►Upgrades --

► Skill Shurikenjutsu
► Rank C
► Points 0
► Upgrades --

► Skill Kekkei Genkai
► Rank C
► Points 2
► Upgrades --

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OOC Information
MAKE SOME NOISE!

Outside Info, Yo!

► Face Claim

Uchiha Ichiro | Sword Art Online | Kirigaya Kazuto

► Chatango Name

Houshima

► Other Characters

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► Special Position Claim

One-Tomoe Sharingan

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[Me]

Please add the "Upgrade" Subsection to your new application, and within Shurikenjutsu Upgrade Section, please [Clan] and remove it from beside the points.

I will like to remind you that you receive one ReVamp per lifetime, if you acknowedge this already, simply make that edit and it shall be done.

[Uchiha Ichiro]

edited sir

[Me]

Completed.