Kaguya Jojo
Mist Ninja
Ichibuntai [M:5860:5000:]
The Hidden Guardian
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Post by Kaguya Jojo on Nov 11, 2013 17:13:22 GMT -5
Technique Name: Gantai no Jutsu | Bandage Technique Technique's Label: Universal Technique Prerequisites: N/A Rank: D Type: Iryou Ninjutsu Elemental Nature: N/A Hand-Seals: Rat (Hold) Speed of Technique: 2.0x Kunai Speed Chakra Consumption: Low Description: The user focuses chakra into a nearby physical solid material, such as clothes, paper, bone, or stone. Thereby forming it into an adhesive, sterile strip that’s reminiscent of a bandage. Once formed and applied, the makeshift bandage will remain without the need of extensive chakra input.
Technique Name: Suji Rirakkusu | Muscle Relaxer Technique's Label: Universal Technique Prerequisites: Chakra Control A-rank Rank: D Type: Iryou Ninjutsu Elemental Nature: N/A Hand-Seals: 2 Speed of Technique: N/A Chakra Consumption: Low-Medium Description: The user focuses chakra into their hands and causing a light blue glow to emit from their hands. The user then places their hands over the afflicted area, relaxing the muscles over a course of two posts. If used for four posts or longer, the user’s muscles will soften and their muscle memory will fade. After the third post the consumption becomes Medium.
Technique Name: Ketsuki Gyouku | Blood Coagulation Technique's Label: Universal Technique Prerequisites: Chakra Control A-rank Rank: C Type: Iryou Ninjutsu Elemental Nature: N/A Speed of Technique: 2.0 Kunai Speed Chakra Consumption: Low-Constant Description: The user focuses chakra around their hands, creating a faint white glow around their hands. The user then places their hands on the wound, focusing chakra into the blood and coagulating it. Minor wounds take two posts to clot, whilst major ones require five posts, and critical injuries, such as a severed limb, requires eight posts to clot. For every consumption rank above low, the amount of posts required drops by one per.
Technique Name: Kenzan Metsuki | Seeing Eyes Technique's Label: B-rank Chakra Control Technique Prerequisites: Katon Innate Affinity Rank: D Type: Iryou Ninjutsu Elemental Nature: N/A Hand-Seals: Rat (Hold) Chakra Consumption: Tiny-Constant Description: The user forms the hand seal, holding the rat seal and holding it in between their eye. The user focuses chakra into a lens on either side, allowing them to see inside their patient’s body in a small area, one roughly six inches by four inches in area. The user can perceive the chakra circulatory system as well as the inner systems of the body when looking through this lens.
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Post by kaboom on Nov 14, 2013 12:32:48 GMT -5
1. I think this would probably only work on solid objects, such as paper, cloth, etc. Not sand, leaves, stones, or dirt.
2. Instead of Low-Medium make this a constant consumption
3. Up the rank
4. No.
Also, the second and third techniques need a CC pre-req.
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Kaguya Jojo
Mist Ninja
Ichibuntai [M:5860:5000:]
The Hidden Guardian
Posts: 36
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Post by Kaguya Jojo on Nov 14, 2013 13:26:06 GMT -5
1| Edited that portion
2| I just think you skimmed the jutsu unless you meant to have me put this as a medium/low consumption. I ask you for clarrification before I edit this technique as it is a low consumption for three posts and a medium in the fourth as described in the technique. Made CC A-rank a pre-req.
3| Rank is now C-rank. Made CC A-rank a pre-req.
4| Gonna need a reason why that is a no. This jutsu could be quite useful in a surgical performance and such events. Granted I don't mind putting in that this jutsu cannot be used in a battle but in medically controlled environments I do not see the problem with this jutsu.
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Post by kaboom on Nov 17, 2013 13:23:54 GMT -5
1. Things that are not capable of being paper like in any way, shape, or form can't be used in this technique, so take out the bone, stone, etc.
3. The last sentence about having lower post count if more chakra is used doesn't make sense with a Low-constant consumption.
4. The reason I said no is because this infringes upon doujutsu, even more so than I previously thought when I first read it. That reasoning alone is more than enough to deny it, but there are also a host of other flaws that I could go into.
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